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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are the advantages more than disadvantages of such services. v.5

People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are the advantages more than disadvantages of such services. v. 5
In these days, people are installing different software, which translate languages through the internet. In my opinion, I consider that online language translation apps can bring many advantages for public compared to any disadvantages it may bring. Despite the drawbacks bellow, I believe that benefits gained by the translation apps are extremely useful for any person in the contemporary era. One extremely merits of the language translation software is that it facilitates travellers to travel anywhere in the world without considering the language barrier factor. In other words, having a translation app people do not need to be tensed about communication during travelling. For example, Bangladeshi people are now more comfortable in the restaurant in China, where people only talk in Chinese language, because of using the translation software. Another reason for using software, which translates any language, is that is cheaper than any language course. Moreover, people can learn English through software at any time and place, whereas language courses in the training centre have a specific schedule. Admittedly, there are basic issues involved in the online translation apps when people use it only as a method of learning language. Firstly, it is not possible to learn fundamental rules, which is vital for any language. In other words, software can only translate a sentence or a passage, but does not show the grammar of the translated language. Secondly, people have to face problems when the internet will not be available in the remote areas. For instance, without translation as well as conversation, people cannot move on the china, Hong Kong, where native people only talk through their own language, In conclusion, using only translation software may bring more benefits than any of the minor problems that could result from not having the internet or not facilitating to know the basic rules of a language.
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, which translate
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languages
through the internet. In my opinion, I consider that online
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language
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translation
apps can bring
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advantages for public compared to any disadvantages it may bring.

Despite the drawbacks bellow, I believe that benefits gained by the
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translation
apps are
extremely
useful for any person in the contemporary era. One
extremely
merits of the
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language
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translation
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software
is that it facilitates
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travellers
to travel anywhere in the world without considering the
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language
barrier factor.
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, having a
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translation
app
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people
do not need to
be tensed
about communication during travelling.
For example
, Bangladeshi
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people
are
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now
more comfortable in the restaurant in China, where
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people
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only
talk in Chinese
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language
,
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of using the
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translation
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. Another reason for using
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software
, which translates any
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language
, is
that is
cheaper than any
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language
course.
Moreover
,
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can learn English through
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software
at any time and place, whereas
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language
courses in the training
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have a specific schedule.

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, there are basic issues involved in the online
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apps when
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people
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it
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as a method of learning
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.
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, which is vital for any
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.
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can
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translate a sentence or a passage,
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the grammar of the translated
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people
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face problems when the internet will not be available in the remote areas.
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translation
as well
as conversation,
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people
cannot
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on the china, Hong Kong, where native
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language,

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, using
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may bring more benefits than any of the minor problems that could result from not having the internet or not facilitating to know the basic
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of a
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.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
41Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
The man who does not know other languages, unless he is a man of genius, necessarily has deficiencies in his ideas.
Victor Hugo

IELTS essay People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are the advantages more than disadvantages of such services. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
305 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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