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Part 2You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you’re going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. Describe something interesting that you once found. You should say: what you fou v.2

Part 2You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you’re going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. Describe something interesting that you once found. You should say: what you fou v. 2
Once I observed how a mammoth gorilla was getting the opportunity to rest and making a delicate cushion of straw under her head. Notable Darwin theory says about natural selection, which means that the human is animal evolved from an animal. In light of this, a definition of animal rights seems appropriate and reasonable. Some contend that people need to protect animals, whilst others agree to exploit them. This essay discusses both views, meanwhile, I believe that humankind should care about the various creatures in the world and respect other natural inhabitants. Stepping forward in evolution allowed humanity to domesticate animals and consequently employ them as a source of labor. Hereafter society has been using these creatures for a wide range of experiments and tests. This is because, firstly, such searches give the most accurate and indispensable results. Numerous of live-saving medical discoveries have resulted directly from research using animals. Another essential point of involving animate beings with the closest DNA to humans is expanding the genetic study, which can be considered as cloning human future. The foregoing discussion implies that it’s cruel and unacceptable to deprive animals’ rights, which I condone. Humankind as a whole has been becoming increasingly demanded from suffering creatures while it's worth saying that people are not so special and rationally should not be held above other forms of lives. A closer look at the data indicates that there is plenty of remarkable evidence showing the intelligence of animals. These researches prove their abilities to learn and develop skills, with a focus on their reactions and communication. Take for a memorable example a gorilla called Koko. That primate was capable to speak sign language with humans as well as watching movies and indicating feelings. To conclude, although it is undoubtedly true that humans will continue to utilizing creatures with their benefits in the closest future, I assume that we are skillful to reevaluate our way of using animate beings and their place in our lives. In the first place, creating alternative methods for scientific researches, which do not include intelligent beings can be an enormous millstone on a way for securing basic animals’ rights.
Once I observed how a mammoth gorilla was getting the opportunity to rest and making a delicate cushion of straw under her head. Notable Darwin theory says about natural selection, which means that the
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human
is
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animal
evolved from an
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animal
. In light of this, a definition of
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animal
rights seems appropriate and reasonable.
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Some
contend that
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people
need to protect
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animals
, whilst others
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agree
to exploit them. This essay discusses both views, meanwhile, I believe that humankind should care about the various
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creatures
in the world and respect other natural inhabitants.

Stepping forward in evolution
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allowed
humanity to domesticate
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animals
and
consequently
employ them as a source of labor. Hereafter society has been using these
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creatures
for a wide range of experiments and
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tests
. This is
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because
,
firstly
, such searches give the most accurate and indispensable results. Numerous of
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live
-saving medical discoveries have resulted
directly
from research using
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animals
. Another essential point of involving animate beings with the closest DNA to
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humans
is expanding the genetic study, which can
be considered
as cloning
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human
future.

The foregoing discussion implies that it’s cruel and unacceptable to deprive
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animals’
rights, which I condone. Humankind as a whole has been becoming
increasingly
demanded from suffering
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creatures
while it's worth saying that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are not
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so
special and
rationally
should not
be held
above other forms of
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lives
. A closer look at the data indicates that there is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of remarkable evidence showing the intelligence of
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animals
. These researches prove their abilities to learn and develop
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
, with a focus on their reactions and communication. Take for a memorable example a gorilla called
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Koko
. That primate was capable to speak
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sign
language with
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humans
as well
as watching movies and indicating feelings.

To conclude
, although it is
undoubtedly
true that
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humans
will continue to utilizing
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creatures
with their benefits in the closest future, I assume that we are skillful to reevaluate our way of using animate beings and their place in our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
. In the
first
place, creating alternative methods for scientific researches, which do not include intelligent beings can be an enormous millstone on a way for securing basic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals’
rights.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay Part 2You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you’re going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. Describe something interesting that you once found. You should say: what you fou v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
359 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
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