It is thought by some individuals that longer prison sentences would reduce crime rates. Others think that there are other ways of reducing it. Although staying in prison for long would ensure that they learn from their mistakes, I believe giving them parole will be more effective.
Reduction of crime in a state or country is not dependent on the time an individual stays in detention. Although it is thought by some that it will ensure that they learn from their mistakes and decide to do right. I disagree with this view. As a teenager, there was a young boy in my area that was caught for stealing, he was taken to prison and he stayed awhile. However, when he was released he went back to stealing because to him that is all he knew how to do. Therefore, keeping prisoners for a long period might not be the answer to crime reduction.
On the other hand, giving the prisoners parole on time will ensure they integrate into the society and learn to live again. In other words, they can learn to cope without thinking of stealing because they have not been left in the cell for a long time. As a teenager, I saw my uncle blend back in the community after he served the jail term for six months for stealing. So, parole is an effective way of integrating them back into the society and they in turn can be good members of the community.
In conclusion, despite people vary in their opinion, I consider allowing early release of criminals will ensure that they become good members of the society.
It is
thought
by
some
individuals that longer prison sentences would
reduce
crime rates. Others
think
that there are
other
ways of reducing it. Although staying in prison for long would
ensure
that they
learn
from their mistakes, I believe giving them parole will be more effective.
Reduction of crime in a state or country is not dependent on the time an individual stays in detention. Although it is
thought
by
some
that it will
ensure
that they
learn
from their mistakes and decide to do right. I disagree with this view. As a
teenager
, there was a young boy in my area that
was caught
for stealing, he
was taken
to
prison and
he stayed awhile.
However
, when he
was released
he went back to stealing
because
to him
that is
all he knew how to do.
Therefore
, keeping prisoners for a long period might not be the answer to crime reduction.
On the
other
hand, giving the prisoners parole on time will
ensure
they integrate into the society and
learn
to
live
again. In
other
words, they can
learn
to cope without thinking of stealing
because
they have not been
left
in the cell for a long time. As a
teenager
, I
saw
my uncle blend back in the community after he served the jail term for six months for stealing.
So
, parole is an effective way of integrating them back into the
society and
they in turn can be
good
members of the community.
In conclusion
, despite
people
vary in their opinion, I consider allowing early release of criminals will
ensure
that they become
good
members of the society.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes