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Part 1Flowers1. Do you like to have flowers in your home? (Why/Why not)2. Where would you go to buy flowers? (Why)3. On what occasions woould you give someone flowers? 4. Are flowers important in your culture? Part 2Describe a meeting you remember going to v.1

Part 1Flowers1. Do you like to have flowers in your home? (Why/Why not)2. Where would you go to buy flowers? (Why)3. On what occasions woould you give someone flowers? 4. Are flowers important in your culture? Part 2Describe a meeting you remember going to v. 1
With the advent of technology, global warming has been increasing in multiple folds. Global warming has many adverse effects if necessary precautionary measures have not been taken. Global warming is mainly caused by the increase of electrical vehicles and over usage of technology by the inhabitants of the earth. For example, as per the research study conducted by the department of Melbourne environmental studies, it's been found that the consumption of motor vehicles in every 5 hrs per day, give rise to increase in global warming by 1%. Furthermore, global warming leads to tearing down of the ozone layer in a fast phase, which has a drastic change in the climate. So instead of using vehicles equipped with Petrol or diesel, migrating to Eco friendly options like green vehicles will be a better alternative. However, only reducing the usage of gasoline is not adequate to curb the global warming. Take an instance, the government of Finland puts restrictions on the motor vehicles and the survey found that still the temperature in Finland has been raised to 2%. This is because of other factors such as rapid industrialization, disposing the electric and medical waste in the environment. By looking into larger picture we conclude that government should take appropriate action by restricting the dumping of waste, checking the norms followed by the companies and encouraging Eco friendly vehicles so that the world becomes fruitful to us. The conclusion is we will lower the consumption of pollution generated vehicles by shifting to Eco friendly vehicles. I strongly advocate the cutback of the gas releasing vehicles as well as control the squander of poisonous gases from the manufacturers.
With the advent of technology,
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global
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warming
has been increasing in multiple folds.
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Global
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warming
has
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many
adverse effects if necessary precautionary measures have not
been taken
.

Global
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warming
is
mainly
caused by the increase of electrical
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vehicles
and over usage of technology by the inhabitants of the earth.
For example
, as per the research study conducted by the department of Melbourne environmental studies, it's
been found
that the consumption of motor
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vehicles
in every 5 hrs per day, give rise to increase in
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global
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warming
by 1%.
Furthermore
,
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global
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warming
leads to tearing down of the ozone layer in a
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fast
phase, which has a drastic
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change
in the climate.
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So
instead
of using
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vehicles
equipped with Petrol or diesel, migrating to Eco friendly options like green
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vehicles
will be a better alternative.

However
,
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only
reducing the usage of gasoline is not adequate to curb the
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global
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warming
. Take an instance, the
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government
of Finland puts restrictions on the motor
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vehicles
and the survey found that
still
the temperature in Finland has
been raised
to 2%. This is
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because
of other factors such as rapid industrialization, disposing the electric and medical waste in the environment. By looking into larger picture we conclude that
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government
should take appropriate action by restricting the dumping of waste, checking the norms followed by the
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companies
and encouraging Eco friendly
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vehicles
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so
that the world becomes fruitful to us.

The conclusion is we will lower the consumption of pollution generated
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vehicles
by shifting to Eco friendly
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vehicles
. I
strongly
advocate the cutback of the gas releasing
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vehicles
as well
as control
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the squander
of poisonous gases from the manufacturers.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Part 1Flowers1. Do you like to have flowers in your home? (Why/Why not)2. Where would you go to buy flowers? (Why)3. On what occasions woould you give someone flowers? 4. Are flowers important in your culture? Part 2Describe a meeting you remember going to v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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