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Describe a meeting you remember going to at work college or school You should say when and where the meeting was held who was at the meeting what the people at the meeting talked about and explain why you remember going to this meeting v.1

Describe a meeting you remember going to at work college or school You should say when and where the meeting was held who was at the meeting what the people at the meeting talked about and explain why you remember going to this meeting v. 1
Over the past few decades, there has been a substantial decline in the living standards of people. Some are on view that medical practitioners are highly accountable for raising awareness among people about improving their health. This essay will argue that it is an utmost responsibility of the doctors to educate the patients about their wellness. To begin with, some people believe in self-medication and use the internet for this purpose, rather than visiting a doctor. They think that doctors are expensive and can look after their health on their own. Since online access is easily available, they search for their symptoms. There is a host of instances recorded where people prefer to treat cold, fever on their own, by searching for the treatment online. Hence, these instances have bolstered the notion that people can look after their health on their own. Although self-medication is inexpensive, it can also be fatal. A growing number of people, including me, assert that people doctors are highly accountable to inculcate people about their physical, mental and emotional well being improved. Doctors are extremely educated professionals, and are full of knowledge. They know how to deal with patients showing deadly diseases and are a credible, trustworthy source. For instance, a tuberculosis patient need vigilant care of the doctor, in order to improve the patient’s ailment. To conclude, some are on view that doctors play an indispensable role to improve patient’s fitness. I completely agree with this notion as they are experienced and gain training about patient care.
Over the past few decades, there has been a substantial decline in the living standards of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
are on view that medical practitioners are
highly
accountable for raising awareness among
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
about improving their health. This essay will argue that it is an utmost responsibility of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
doctors
to educate the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
patients
about their wellness.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
believe in self-medication and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the internet for this purpose,
rather
than visiting a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
doctor
. They
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
doctors
are expensive and can look after their health on their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
. Since online access is
easily
available, they search for their symptoms. There is a host of instances recorded where
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
prefer to treat
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
, fever on their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
, by searching for the treatment online.
Hence
, these instances have bolstered the notion that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can look after their health on their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
.

Although self-medication is inexpensive, it can
also
be fatal. A growing number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
, including me, assert that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
doctors
are
highly
accountable to inculcate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
about their physical, mental and emotional
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Doctors
are
extremely
educated professionals, and are full of knowledge. They know how to deal with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
patients
showing deadly diseases and are a credible, trustworthy source.
For instance
, a tuberculosis
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
patient
need vigilant care of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
doctor
, in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
patient’s
ailment.

To conclude
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
are on view that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
doctors
play an indispensable role to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
patient’s
fitness. I completely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this notion as they
are experienced
and gain training about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
patient
care.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Describe a meeting you remember going to at work college or school You should say when and where the meeting was held who was at the meeting what the people at the meeting talked about and explain why you remember going to this meeting v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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