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Some teachers agree that group studies are helpful to students whereas some teachers are it is good and students study alone. Where you think which one is good as per your opinion and justify it. v.1

Some teachers agree that group studies are helpful to students whereas some teachers are it is good and students study alone. Where you think which one is good as per your opinion and justify it. v. 1
Choosing an appropriate degree from the vast range of university subjects is always challenging. There are many people think that students should allow to select any subject as they want. However, others think they should choose subjects by considering future growth. Though it is best to have many subject options, This essay discusses both sides and give my opinion. People perform best outcome when they work in their interesting field. It is not appropriate to expect that everyone like science and technology by thinking it useful for future. According to the Children development authority survey found that only twenty five percentage of children prefers Science and Technology related subjects and hand majority of the children like Sports and Arts related subjects. Therefore, people need to choose subjects as per their passion and interest which is always good for society. However, another area of subjects is included in science and technology advancements. For example, Art related works can be accomplished by latest graphic softwares which is much easier and quicker to design anything. Nowadays, most people like video games than physical sports activity. Although there are few areas can map with science and technology, not all the field of study. Finally, This essay discussed about factors to consider when selecting university subjects, either only what useful in future or all subjects as preferred. According to my opinion, it is best to have a range of subjects to people select their own interest. On the other hands science and technologies trying brings all subjects within their development.
Choosing an appropriate degree from the vast range of university
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is always challenging. There are
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many
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people
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think
that students should
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allow
to select any
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subject
as they want.
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, others
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think
they should choose
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subjects
by considering future growth. Though it is best to have
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many
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subject
options, This essay discusses both sides and give my opinion.

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People
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perform best
outcome when they work in their interesting field. It is not appropriate to
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expect
that everyone like
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science
and
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technology
by thinking it useful for future. According to the Children development authority survey found that
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only
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twenty five
percentage of children prefers
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Science
and
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Technology
related
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subjects
and hand
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majority of
the children like Sports and Arts related
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subjects
.
Therefore
,
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people
need to choose
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subjects
as per their passion and interest which is always
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good
for society.

However
, another area of
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subjects
is included
in
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science
and
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technology
advancements.
For example
, Art related works can
be accomplished
by latest graphic
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softwares
which is much easier and quicker to design anything. Nowadays, most
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people
like video games than physical sports activity. Although there are few areas can map with
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science
and
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technology
, not all the field of study.

Finally
, This essay
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discussed about factors
to consider when selecting university
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subjects
, either
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only
what useful in future or all
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subjects
as preferred. According to my opinion, it is best to have a range of
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subjects
to
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people
select their
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own
interest. On the other hands
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science
and
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technologies
trying brings all
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subjects
within their development.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some teachers agree that group studies are helpful to students whereas some teachers are it is good and students study alone. Where you think which one is good as per your opinion and justify it. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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