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Over the past few decades international travel has become more affordable and many people now choose overseas holidays As a result tourism is becoming a profitable industry in many countries However despite the benefits tourism can also create probl v.1

Over the past few decades international travel has become more affordable and many people now choose overseas holidays As a result tourism is becoming a profitable industry in many countries However despite the benefits tourism can also create probl v. 1
It is considered by some people that having friends who always agree with them is better, while others argue that it is beneficial to have friends that disagree with them. Although disagreements between friends might have some advantages, I believe that friendships can be stronger and long-lasting if friends have similar opinions. On the one hand, some people consider agreements between friends to be advantageous. Disagreements can teach people how to negotiate and resolve conflict with their friends. Constant arguments with friends contribute to better negotiation skills, which is a beneficial skill to have in life. Additionally, accepting friends’ differences helps people become more open-minded and broadens their horizons. For instance, individuals can be more open towards other cultures and traditions and can befriend anyone, no matter where they are from or what their beliefs are. However, disagreements can make friendships fragile since arguing constantly is detrimental to any relationship. On the other hand, other people argue that friends who share the same opinions build the strongest friendships, and I agree. Friends who agree on almost everything are more comfortable and relaxed with each other since they can voice their opinions freely. As a consequence, this nurtures trust between friends and brings them closer. Another benefit is that it reduces conflict and preserves friendships. Some people tend to be aggressive if their friends do not agree with them and, as a consequence, they might even fight their friends who disagree with them. Due to this, friends can become distant and valuable friendships can be lost. In conclusion, while people might have varying perspectives, I believe that friends who always agree with each other can build the most powerful and successful friendships.
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advantages, I believe that
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can be stronger and long-lasting if
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have similar opinions.

On the one hand,
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consider agreements between
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to be advantageous. Disagreements can teach
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people
how to negotiate and resolve conflict with their
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. Constant arguments with
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contribute to better negotiation
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to have in life.
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differences
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helps
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people
become more open-minded and broadens their horizons.
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, individuals can be more open towards
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other
cultures and traditions and can befriend anyone, no matter where they are from or what their beliefs are.
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, disagreements can
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fragile since arguing
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on almost everything are more comfortable and relaxed with each
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since they can voice their opinions
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. As a consequence, this nurtures trust between
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friends
and brings them closer. Another benefit is that it
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conflict and preserves
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friendships
.
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agree
with them and, as a consequence, they might even fight their
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friends
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disagree with them. Due to this,
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can become distant and valuable
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can
be lost
.

In conclusion
, while
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might have varying perspectives, I believe that
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always
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with each
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can build the most powerful and successful
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Over the past few decades international travel has become more affordable and many people now choose overseas holidays As a result tourism is becoming a profitable industry in many countries However despite the benefits tourism can also create probl v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
281 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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