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One of the controversial issues related to professors is that whether or not they must allow students to use the internet connected devices in classes v.1

One of the controversial issues related to professors is that whether or not they must allow students to use the internet connected devices in classes v. 1
Creating e-books have changed our lives significantly. It brought a lot of benefits in a daily routine. Nonetheless, there are some disadvantages which came out with this innovation. For me, it has more profitable than the books that we can take from common libraries. Digitalisation books where the innovation that carried us in a century where mobility, convenience and ease of usage are our priority in usage items. If we need to know some information about the book or we want to read any of it just two things that we need are internet and smartphone, or any other subject that we can utilize for getting in-network. For instance, you are in a subway and want to spend that time with quality, you can use your smartphone for finding an interesting book and further reading, so you get information, spent time with benefits and did it faster than you have to do it in the past. Several people perceive it as a step back because of health harm. In our new generation, it is common to have glasses and problems with eyesight. Sitting in front of monitors and smartphone screens reward us with eye troubles; however, reading books carry those problems too. It depends on the time spent on reading books or e-books because to get something you have to give something back. In conclusion, I would say that in my opinion, it is better to read e-books rather than ordinary books, which were made from wood, trees, that we are chopping every day for having a good instance on the bookshelves.
Creating e-books have
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changed
our
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lives
significantly
. It brought
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a lot of
benefits in a daily routine. Nonetheless, there are
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some
disadvantages which came out with this innovation.

For me, it has more profitable than the
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books
that we can take from common libraries.

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Digitalisation
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books
where the innovation that carried us in a century where mobility, convenience and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
of usage are our priority in usage items. If we need to know
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
information about the
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book or
we want to read any of it
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just
two things that we need are internet and smartphone, or any other subject that we can utilize for getting in-network.
For instance
, you are in a subway and want to spend that time with quality, you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
your smartphone for finding an interesting
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book
and
further
reading,
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so
you
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get
information, spent time with benefits and did it faster than you
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have to
do it in the past.

Several
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people
perceive it as a step back
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because
of health harm. In our new generation, it is common to have glasses and problems with eyesight. Sitting in front of monitors and smartphone screens reward us with eye troubles;
however
, reading
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books
carry those problems too. It depends on the time spent on reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
or e-books
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because
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
something you
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have to
give something back.

In conclusion
, I would say that in my opinion, it is better to read e-books
rather
than ordinary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
, which
were made
from wood, trees, that we are chopping every day for having a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
instance on the bookshelves.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay One of the controversial issues related to professors is that whether or not they must allow students to use the internet connected devices in classes v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
262 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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