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OK. Young children and art. Research suggests that learning art skills can benefit ayoung child’s development. Two of the ways it can do this is by providing a platformto express complex emotions and by encouraging persistence. What do I mean when I say v.1

OK. Young children and art. Research suggests that learning art skills can benefit ayoung child’s development. Two of the ways it can do this is by providing a platformto express complex emotions and by encouraging persistence. What do I mean when I say v. 1
In recent times, broadcasting has been painting everything bad and therefore needs to bring morality into the reporting. In this essay, I will provide insight about the dangers of poor persona branding and fake news. Although I quiet agree with introducing sanity into their communication. The effect of fake news in a country cannot be fully reported. Lack of investigative journalism and dissemination of factual, truthful and concise information would have brought unity among citizens of a country. For instance, In Nigeria, falsified reports have created divisions in lines of tribe, religion and politics which have in many ways affect development and growth of the nation as a whole. Hoax news has given birth to hate speech which has further widened gaps among the residents of our great country. For example, prior to the 2015 general election, various sham stories were shared to discredit personality and political parties and in most cases this action jeopardize the dreams of our fore father's. The role of branding in communication is vital in public perception. Poor persona, making by media outfits to de-market some personality and product have done lots of damage to name of human and goods. It is imperative to know that defamation of character has become a tool in publications to undermine others. It is important that government and other stakeholders should have a roundtable discussion bringing the voices of ill informed about the problems in communication while advocating for good profile projection. For instance, a rumour about those eating Indomie who died after its consumption. This is a bad impression of the products which ultimately affects sales and when an image is involved can lead to the person committing suicide. In conclusion, provision of verified information in daily print and motion will foster unity among people at the same time discouraging spreading of fake news as well as shunning poor public presentation would also help develop love and harmony within the populace.
In recent times, broadcasting has been painting everything
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
and
therefore
needs to bring morality into the reporting. In this essay, I will provide insight about the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
dangers
of poor persona branding and fake
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
I quiet
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agree
with introducing sanity into their communication.

The effect of fake
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
in a country cannot be
fully
reported. Lack of investigative journalism and dissemination of factual, truthful and concise information would have brought unity among citizens of a country.
For instance
, In Nigeria, falsified reports have created divisions in lines of tribe, religion and politics which have in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
ways affect development and growth of the nation as a whole. Hoax
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
birth to hate speech which has
further
widened gaps among the residents of our great country.
For example
, prior to the 2015 general election, various sham stories
were shared
to discredit personality and political parties and
in most cases
this action jeopardize the dreams of our fore father's.

The role of branding in communication is vital in public perception. Poor persona, making by media outfits to
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de-market
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some
personality and product have done lots of damage to name of human and
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goods
. It is imperative to know that defamation of character has become a tool in publications to undermine others. It is
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important
that
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government
and other stakeholders should have a
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roundtable
discussion bringing the voices of
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
ill informed
about the problems in communication while advocating for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
profile projection.
For instance
, a
Possible spelling mistake. 'rumour' is British English.
rumour
about those eating
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Indomie
who
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died
after its consumption. This is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
impression of the products which
ultimately
affects sales and when an image
is involved
can lead to the person committing suicide.

In conclusion
, provision of verified information in daily print and motion will foster unity among
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
at the same time discouraging spreading of fake
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
as well
as shunning poor public presentation would
also
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help
develop
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love
and harmony within the populace.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay OK. Young children and art. Research suggests that learning art skills can benefit ayoung child’s development. Two of the ways it can do this is by providing a platformto express complex emotions and by encouraging persistence. What do I mean when I say v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
323 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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