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Nuclear technology can be used for the advancement and betterment of the world and at the same time it can be a great threat for the people of the world. Do you support that the nuclear technology should be used for constructive purposes? v.3

Nuclear technology can be used for the advancement and betterment of the world and at the same time it can be a great threat for the people of the world. Do you support that the nuclear technology should be used for constructive purposes? v. 3
Now-a-days, nuclear technology is regarded as a great contributor of the enrichment and improvement of the country. Even though this technology could be a blessing, it could turn into a massive destroyer by the wrongful conducts. The implement of the constructive purposes could be happened by appropriate utilization of the nuclear technology for the human welfare. Nuclear Technology against mankind can bring endangerment in the universe. It is believed that this technology is responsible for the devastation for the entire world. Besides, the army or forces use nuclear weapons and atom bombs for their military purposes. This could blow up the whole nation within a few moments. For example, nuclear atomic bomb in Hiroshima and Nagashaki turned the two cities and thousands of people into ashes during the World War 2. The proper use of the nuclear technology can lead to the improvement and betterment of the human race. At present, many nuclear power plants have been built in different places to overcome the energy crisis. Besides, the use of the nuclear technology is broadening rapidly in the medical purposes. Such as, X-ray is widely used for the diagnosis and radiotherapy helps the patient by preventing malignant and cancerous cells. In addition, it also keeps the environment less polluted. In conclusion, nuclear technology has an effective role for the development and progress of the world and promising roles in the future ahead. So, I support the usage of the nuclear technology for the constructive purposes only if we take precautions not to misguide it and use it in a positive intention.
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Now
-a-days, nuclear
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technology
is regarded
as a great contributor of the enrichment and improvement of the country.
Even though
this
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technology
could be a blessing, it could turn into a massive destroyer by the wrongful conducts. The implement of the constructive
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purposes
could
be happened
by appropriate utilization of the nuclear
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technology
for the human welfare.

Nuclear
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Technology
against mankind can bring endangerment in the universe. It
is believed
that this
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technology
is responsible for the devastation for the entire world.
Besides
, the army or forces
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use
nuclear weapons and atom bombs for their military
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purposes
. This could blow up the whole nation within a few moments.
For example
, nuclear atomic bomb in Hiroshima and
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Nagashaki
turned the two cities and thousands of
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people
into ashes during the World War 2.

The proper
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use
of the nuclear
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technology
can lead to the improvement and betterment of the human race. At present,
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many
nuclear power plants have
been built
in
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different
places to overcome the energy crisis.
Besides
, the
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use
of the nuclear
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technology
is broadening
rapidly
in the medical
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purposes
. Such as, X-ray is
widely
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used
for the diagnosis and radiotherapy
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helps
the patient by preventing malignant and cancerous cells.
In addition
, it
also
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keeps
the environment less polluted.

In conclusion
, nuclear
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technology
has an effective role for the development and progress of the world and promising roles in the future ahead.
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So
, I support the usage of the nuclear
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technology
for the constructive
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purposes
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only
if we take precautions not to misguide it and
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use
it in a
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positive
intention.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay Nuclear technology can be used for the advancement and betterment of the world and at the same time it can be a great threat for the people of the world. Do you support that the nuclear technology should be used for constructive purposes? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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