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Nowadays, various types of crimes are done by youngsters all over the world and that have increased significantly. In this essay, I will discuss the Issues of why youngsters are interested to do crimes and give them appropriate solutions to this problem. v.1

Nowadays, various types of crimes are done by youngsters all over the world and that have increased significantly. In this essay, I will discuss the Issues of why youngsters are interested to do crimes and give them appropriate solutions to this problem. v. 1
In recent years, there have been many crimes committed by our young people. They don’t have any fear of their parents as well as from cops. They do everything which they want to do to fulfil their needs and which leads them into the crime world. The number of offences has mostly youngsters. Most of the youngsters want to enjoy their growth like the richest people, according to their dream they don't have any other chance to make money in their life then they join some Mafia parties. They don't have any idea about the outcome of that work even their families never know about their this kind of criminal activity. I have one example, in my country, most of the youngsters around age 20 to 30 years are part of most of the drug parties. There have various types of solutions to solve this problem because every problem has its own solution. To reduce this problem from youngster's life for always to do some effective steps are most important to do with our government and by local communities as well as their parents give them some information about that work. How that is harmful to them and influenced their future. Firstly All Colleges need to pursue a crime world that destroys the life of a person. Secondly, if anyone one arrested by the cops doing lawbreaking activity makes a video and take a picture and upload on social media, then videos and pictures will go viral on social media. They feel some shame and don't do this kind of crime again, even others think a lot to do that type of offence. In Conclusion, the Family and local community give such information about the protection from crimes and save their young generation of the crime world.
In recent years, there have been
many
crimes
committed by our young
people
. They don’t have any fear of their parents
as well
as from cops. They do everything which they want to do to fulfil their needs and which leads them into the
crime
world. The number of
offences
has
mostly
youngsters. Most of the youngsters want to enjoy their growth like the richest
people
, according to their dream they don't have any other chance to
make
money in their life then they
join
some
Mafia parties. They don't have any
idea
about the outcome of that work even their families never know about their this kind of criminal activity. I have one example, in my country, most of the youngsters around age 20 to 30 years are part of most of the drug parties.

There have various types of solutions to solve this problem
because
every problem has its
own
solution. To
reduce
this problem from youngster's life for always to do
some
effective steps are most
important
to do with our
government
and by local communities
as well
as their parents give them
some
information about that work. How
that is
harmful to them and influenced their future.
Firstly
All Colleges need to pursue a
crime
world that
destroys
the life of a person.
Secondly
, if anyone one arrested by the cops doing lawbreaking activity
makes
a video and take a picture and upload on social media, then videos and pictures will go viral on social media. They feel
some
shame and don't do this kind of
crime
again, even others
think
a lot to do that type of
offence
.

In Conclusion
, the Family and local community give such information about the protection from
crimes
and save their young generation of the
crime
world.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays, various types of crimes are done by youngsters all over the world and that have increased significantly. In this essay, I will discuss the Issues of why youngsters are interested to do crimes and give them appropriate solutions to this problem. v. 1

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