Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development? v.1
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development? v. 1
Bill Gates founded Microsoft approximately 40 years ago. Since then we have seen an impressive technological improvement and technology has changed the way many people interact with each other. This essay will discuss the ways technology has affected the types of relationships people make as well as the question whether this is a positive or a negative development.
To begin with, many of our relationships have become superficial. Advancement allows to communicate with each other using the internet. We do not have to speak eye-to-eye with each other. The relationship we have with our friends on Facebook, for instance, is not a strong one, because we often know the person barely. Furthermore, progress has led to many international relationships. People have friends all over the world, because meeting them is not a big deal anymore. Skype, for example, makes a person appear, despite one lives far away.
Of course, this is a positive development, because relationships have become much easier. Nowadays, we can send small messages via WhatsApp, for instance, while a hundred years ago we had to write letters. However, due to our superficial relationships we do not really know each other and feels like caring about inner values and feeling is not important today.
In conclusion, the technical evolution has left us speechless, even though it changed the types of relationships people make. This essay explained the different ways technology affected our relationship and argued positive and negative aspects of the technological development. In my opinion, the this is positive because relationships have become much easier.
Bill Gates founded Microsoft approximately 40 years ago. Since
then we
have
seen
an impressive technological improvement and technology has
changed
the way
many
people
interact with each
other
. This essay will discuss the
ways
technology has
affected
the types of
relationships
people
make
as well
as
the question whether
this is a
positive
or a
negative
development.
To
begin
with,
many
of our
relationships
have become superficial. Advancement
allows
to communicate
with each
other
using the internet. We do not
have to
speak eye-to-eye with each
other
. The
relationship
we have with our friends on Facebook,
for instance
, is not a strong one,
because
we
often
know the person
barely
.
Furthermore
, progress has led to
many
international
relationships
.
People
have friends all over the world,
because
meeting them is not a
big
deal anymore. Skype,
for example
,
makes
a person appear, despite one
lives
far away.
Of course
, this is a
positive
development,
because
relationships
have become much easier. Nowadays, we can
send
small
messages via WhatsApp,
for instance
, while a hundred years ago we had to write letters.
However
, due to our superficial
relationships
we do not
really
know each
other
and feels like caring about inner values and feeling is not
important
today
.
In conclusion
, the technical evolution has
left
us speechless,
even though
it
changed
the types of
relationships
people
make
. This essay
explained
the
different
ways
technology
affected
our
relationship
and argued
positive
and
negative
aspects of the technological development. In my opinion,
the this
is
positive
because
relationships
have become much easier.
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