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Nowadays the increased amount of garbage is a real concern. Why this is happening. what can be done to resolve it? v.2

Nowadays the increased amount of garbage is a real concern. Why this is happening. what can be done to resolve it? v. 2
Concept of garbage is as old as the human history, but recently, as the population is skyrocketing, it has become a new phenomenon of a real concern. However, if we pinpoint the real cause, we can solve this issue in no time. There are a number of factors which are responsible for this condition. Firstly, in some areas the sewage system is still not underground. These were built approximately hundred years ago and they are not capable to handle dump of recent population and usually overflow in the rainy season and the liter is all over the roads and grounds. Secondly, technology has helped humans in enormous ways, but you cannot ignore it’s drawbacks. Things made of synthetic material-polythene bags, Plastic bottles, Tins, cans, Boxes- do not usually disintegrate into the environment and can be hugely dangerous for marine creatures and also results in high amounts of filth on the earth. Thirdly, Council does not pick up the garbage in regular basis and in some areas, even the service is not provided. Finally, some people habitually through discarded stuff on roads and outside houses, even if there are government provided garbage bins installed in each road. As we know the problem, we can easily take steps to solve each one of them. Firstly, it is the government’s responsibilities to update the infrastructures according to latest demand of the society. Secondly, there should be a ban on the products made of the synthetic material. For instance, recently CDA- ISLAMABAD- has put a ban on plastic bag, which will hopefully prove to be a major step towards a clean environment. Thirdly, local councils should regulate the garbage picking department and strict policies and procedures should be implemented to pick litter and other garbage from house to house on a regular basis, and they should also extend this service to other areas. Finally, there should be a huge campaign to increase awareness among masses to keep their area clean, which will consequently result in increased health and reduced diseases. In conclusion, It is the responsibility of both the government and the people to work together to solve this issue. But prevention is better than cure, so I think the ban on such products will help incredibly in the long run.
Concept of garbage is as
old
as the human history,
but
recently, as the population is skyrocketing, it has become a new phenomenon of a real concern.
However
, if we pinpoint the real cause, we can solve this issue in no time.

There are a number of factors which are responsible for this condition.
Firstly
, in
some
areas
the sewage system is
still
not underground. These
were built
approximately
hundred
years
ago and
they are not capable to handle dump of recent population and
usually
overflow in the rainy season and the liter is all over the roads and grounds.
Secondly
, technology has
helped
humans in enormous ways,
but
you cannot
ignore
it’s
drawbacks. Things made of synthetic material-polythene bags, Plastic bottles, Tins, cans, Boxes- do not
usually
disintegrate into the environment and can be
hugely
dangerous
for marine creatures and
also
results in high amounts of filth on the earth.
Thirdly
, Council does not pick up the garbage in regular basis and in
some
areas
, even the service is not provided.
Finally
,
some
people
habitually
through discarded stuff on roads and outside
houses
, even if there are
government
provided garbage bins installed in each road.

As we know the problem, we can
easily
take steps to solve each one of them.
Firstly
, it is the
government
’s responsibilities to update the infrastructures according to
latest
demand of the society.
Secondly
, there should be a ban on the products made of the synthetic material.
For instance
, recently CDA- ISLAMABAD- has put a ban on plastic bag, which will
hopefully
prove to be a major step towards a clean environment.
Thirdly
, local councils should regulate the garbage picking department and strict policies and procedures should
be implemented
to pick litter and other garbage from
house
to
house
on a regular basis, and they should
also
extend this service to other
areas
.
Finally
, there should be a huge campaign to increase awareness among masses to
keep
their
area
clean, which will
consequently
result in increased health and
reduced
diseases.

In conclusion
, It is the responsibility of both the
government
and the
people
to work together to solve this issue.
But
prevention is better than cure,
so
I
think
the ban on such products will
help
incredibly
in the long run.
17Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS essay Nowadays the increased amount of garbage is a real concern. Why this is happening. what can be done to resolve it? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
377 words
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