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Nowadays, the importance of teacher is diminishing due to increased availability of alternative resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. v.1

Nowadays, the importance of teacher is diminishing due to increased availability of alternative resources. with this statement. v. 1
It is undisputed that education shows the brightest path to student to accomplish their goals. Presently, people believe that the need of tutors is decreasing at an alarming rate due to the access of different alternative learning sources. This essay intends to discord with the given statement firmly and some logical points will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. There are manifold points to endorse my point of view. First and the foremost, teaching skills and methods of a teacher can not faded by other alternative sources like Google, other learning websites. To demonstrate, teachers are the second guardian to student after their parents. So, they teach them every thing such as difference between right and wrong and provide different techniques of learning which probably help them to get success in their studies and in their life too. Besides that, there are no any other learning sources that create peace and calm environment which certainly fascinate student to learn but there is no doubt that tutor will use all their endeavors to propel student to learn and accomplish a great achievement. For instance, many student go the IELTS learning center to get proper guidelines through tutor instead of reading at home through Internet. Hence, It is clear that, learning about the subject matter through teacher is mandatory. Further, emphasizing in my point of view, although, other alternative source such as Internet provides the information about different topics related to their subject matters but it does not provide perfect guidelines to learner to reach depth of their subjects. To recapitulate, I am totally disagree with that statement. Undeniably, alternative sources provide the information to learn but It is clear that, student need tutor as a guide to show them a path which definitely take them to a peak of success.
It
is undisputed
that education
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shows
the brightest path to
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student
to accomplish their goals.
Presently
,
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people
believe that the need of
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tutors
is decreasing at an alarming rate due to the access of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
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alternative
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learning
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sources
. This essay intends to discord with the
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given
statement
firmly
and
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some
logical
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points
will
be discussed
in the upcoming paragraphs.

There are manifold
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points
to endorse my
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point
of view.
First
and the foremost, teaching
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skills
and methods of a teacher can not
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "fade"
faded
by
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other
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alternative
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sources
like Google,
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other
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learning
websites. To demonstrate, teachers are the second guardian to
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student
after their parents.
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So
, they teach them every thing such as difference between right and
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wrong
and
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provide
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different
techniques of
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learning
which
probably
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help
them to
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get
success in their studies and in their life too.
Besides
that, there are
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no
any
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other
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learning
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sources
that create peace and calm environment which
certainly
fascinate
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student
to learn
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but
there is no doubt that
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tutor
will
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use
all their endeavors to propel
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student
to learn and accomplish a great achievement.
For instance
,
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many
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student
go the IELTS
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learning
center to
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get
proper guidelines through
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tutor
instead
of reading at home through Internet.
Hence
, It is
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clear
that,
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learning
about the
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "subject".
subject matter
through teacher is mandatory.

Further
, emphasizing in my
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point
of view, although,
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other
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alternative
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source
such as Internet
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provides
the information about
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different
topics related to their subject matters
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but
it does not
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provide
perfect guidelines to learner to reach depth of their subjects.

To recapitulate, I am
totally
Consider using a past participle here: "disagreed".
disagree
with that statement.
Undeniably
,
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alternative
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sources
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provide
the information to learn
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but
It is
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clear
that,
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student
need
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tutor
as a guide to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
them a path which definitely take them to a peak of success.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays, the importance of teacher is diminishing due to increased availability of alternative resources. with this statement. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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