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Nowadays the differences between countries are becoming less evident because we see the same TV Shows, advertisement, fashion and follow the same brand. To what extend the advantages of this trend outweighs disadvantages? v.2

Nowadays the differences between countries are becoming less evident because we see the same TV Shows, advertisement, fashion and follow the same brand. v. 2
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IELTS essay Nowadays the differences between countries are becoming less evident because we see the same TV Shows, advertisement, fashion and follow the same brand. v. 2

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
669 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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