Sport is currently being contained commerce by companies and a huge amount of money which is paid for sports people. While this trend can be positive to some extent, I would argue that it is more negative.
On the one hand, it is believed that this inclination can be seen as an advantage. Firstly, it creates the motivation for athletes to perform at the best status. The amount of money is also used for providing state-of-the-art facilities to assist them in practicing. In addition to their fabulous salaries, sports celebrities also make a great deal of money through their endorsement of sporting goods such as trainers or even casual clothes or deodorants. Therefore, enterprises can be benefited from supporting renowned players.
However, the aforementioned reasons can be seen as the opposite angle. One disadvantage is that this trend makes sport to be being ruined by a win-at-all-costs attitude, which includes cheating and breaking the rules in order to achieve victory and earn money. For example, soccer players often fall down and say that someone has pushed them, but it is not true. Another disadvantage is that betting companies are becoming prevalent and this often leads to social evils. Eventually, the result of a match will not reality because it is manipulated, so a multitude of spectators will feel despair.
In conclusion, while some activities like sports merchandising or earning from sport are beneficial for sportsmen to some extent, I believe its disadvantages are greater. 
 Sport
 is  
currently
  being contained
 commerce by  
companies
 and a huge amount of  
money
 which  
is paid
 for  
sports
  people
. While this trend can be  
positive
 to  
some
 extent, I would argue that it is more  
negative
.
On the one hand, it  
is believed
 that this inclination can be  
seen
 as an advantage.  
Firstly
, it creates the motivation for athletes to perform at the best status. The amount of  
money
 is  
also
  used
 for providing state-of-the-art facilities to assist them in practicing.  
In addition
 to their fabulous salaries,  
sports
 celebrities  
also
  make
 a great deal of  
money
 through their endorsement of sporting  
goods
 such as trainers or even casual clothes or deodorants.  
Therefore
, enterprises can  
be benefited
 from supporting renowned players. 
However
, the aforementioned reasons can be  
seen
 as the opposite angle. One disadvantage is that this trend  
makes
  sport
 to be  
being ruined
 by a win-at-all-costs attitude, which includes cheating and breaking the  
rules
 in order to achieve victory and earn  
money
.  
For example
, soccer players  
often
 fall down and say that someone has pushed them,  
but
 it is not true. Another disadvantage is that betting  
companies
 are becoming prevalent and this  
often
 leads to social evils.  
Eventually
, the result of a match will not reality  
because
 it  
is manipulated
,  
so
 a multitude of spectators will feel despair. 
In conclusion
, while  
some
 activities like  
sports
 merchandising or earning from  
sport
 are beneficial for sportsmen to  
some
 extent, I believe its disadvantages are greater.