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Nowadays some people think that public libraries are not necessary, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion and examples v.1

Nowadays some people think that public libraries are not necessary, while others disagree. 1
Some people now find public libraries to be unnecessary Yet others don't think so. These both make me to agree as both of them do make sense when it comes to learning a foreign language or, say, just enjoying reading. From one angle, public libraries are preliminary sources to those who are in need of getting something new, or acquiring languages. Furthermore, public libraries are conventional foundations. They are real sources of huge amount of information. I also think that all these are obvious and undeniable. In my opinion, public libraries are the places where you can enjoy and feel the real education atmosphere and where one is able spend time efficiently. For instance, Alisher Navai national library, situated in Tashkent, can be a compatible example for this, I think. However, public libraries are unnecessary to some. As a substitude for it, they prefer other things like the Internet, more precisely, the web-sites including various and numerous e-books on them. Some think that such e-books and educational web-sites on the Internet are, in turn, more beneficial. People can download desperate e-version of books at ease and store a huge number of them on their mobile phones. I think, these can be true at some point as there are not so many prestigious and enormous libraries including wide-range of books. Sometimes people are unable to find what they search for. Not all the countries allocate enough money to the establishment of libraries. For example, according to a Russian survey, the majority of people(68%) said public libraries were not enough. Instead, they would rather Internet sources because of good quality connection. To conclude, both of the arguments made me to agree as they make sense when it comes to learning, or just enjoying reading. For one thing, public libraries are initial sources of learning useful things like languages. For another thing, e-books and a number of educational web-sites are more efficient in as much as being time-saving and easy.
Some
people
now
find
public
libraries to be unnecessary
Yet
others don't
think
so
. These both
make
me to
agree
as both of them do
make
sense when it
comes
to learning a foreign language or, say,
just
enjoying reading.

From one angle,
public
libraries are preliminary
sources
to those who are in need of getting something new, or acquiring languages.
Furthermore
,
public
libraries are conventional foundations. They are real
sources
of huge amount of information. I
also
think
that all these are obvious and undeniable. In my opinion,
public
libraries are the places where you can enjoy and feel the real education atmosphere and where one is
able spend
time
efficiently
.
For instance
,
Alisher
Navai
national library, situated in Tashkent, can be a compatible example for this, I
think
.

However
,
public
libraries are unnecessary to
some
. As a
substitude
for it, they prefer other things like the Internet, more
precisely
, the web-sites including various and numerous e-books on them.
Some
think
that such e-books and educational web-sites on the Internet are, in turn, more beneficial.
People
can download desperate e-version of books at
ease
and store a huge number of them on their mobile phones. I
think
, these can be true at
some
point as there are not
so
many
prestigious and enormous libraries including wide-range of books.
Sometimes
people
are unable to find what they search for. Not all the countries allocate
enough
money to the establishment of libraries.
For example
, according to a Russian survey, the majority of
people(68%)
said
public
libraries were not
enough
.
Instead
, they would
rather
Internet
sources
because
of
good
quality connection.

To conclude
, both of the arguments made me to
agree
as they
make
sense when it
comes
to learning, or
just
enjoying reading. For one thing,
public
libraries are initial
sources
of learning useful things like languages. For another thing, e-books and a number of educational web-sites are more efficient in as much as being time-saving and easy.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Nowadays some people think that public libraries are not necessary, while others disagree. 1

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327 words
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