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Nowadays people visit country as a international tourists. describe advantages and disadvantages. v.1

Nowadays people visit country as a international tourists. describe advantages and disadvantages. v. 1
Nowadays, people visit in overseas countries that is becoming popular. There are many pros and cons of international tourists. This essay will discuss that tourists beneficial for growing economy as well as getting knowledge. However, bad influenced on youngsters and damage in tourist places both are demerit of international tourists. There are main fold advantages of international tourists. First and foremost, visitors travel from one country to other countries which give chance to local people to earn more money. Native people get opportunity to increased their economy due to tourists, who are spend money on tourists place. To illustrate, in India, thousand of people visit The Tajmahal every year, which might becoming main source of employment in that region. Furthermore, worlds have many diverse country so they can help to expand knowledge of natives. Local people try to mimic the behavior of outsiders so that local people learn some other ways of lifestyle. Some visitors great inspiration for young age local people. In contrast, International visitors have some negative side also, which is affect native people. Some visitors have bad habit, they try to damage historical place. For example, many quotes, written in tourists places. Moreover, some youngsters influenced on tourist wrong lifestyle. All bad habits which are attract to youngsters so they try to copy that. To illustrate, smoking and drugging are bad habits most affective in youngster most of this kind habit might be expand due to tourism. To conclude, international tourists beneficial as well as problematic for local people. Economic benefits and increase local growth, while some visitors habit and activities affect all the tourism industry in all over the globe.
Nowadays,
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people
visit in overseas
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countries
that is
becoming popular. There are
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many
pros and cons of
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international
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tourists
. This essay will discuss that
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tourists
beneficial for growing economy
as well
as getting knowledge.
However
,
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bad
influenced on youngsters and damage in
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tourist
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places
both are demerit of
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international
tourists.

There are main fold advantages of
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international
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tourists
.
First
and foremost,
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visitors
travel from one
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country
to other
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countries
which give chance to
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local
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people
to earn more money. Native
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people
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get
opportunity to increased their economy due to
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tourists
, who are
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spend
money on
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tourists
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place
. To illustrate, in India,
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thousand
of
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people
visit The
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Tajmahal
every year, which might becoming main source of employment in that region.
Furthermore
, worlds have
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many
diverse
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country
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so
they can
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help
to expand knowledge of natives.
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Local
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people
try to mimic the behavior of outsiders
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so
that
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local
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people
learn
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some
other ways of lifestyle.
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Some
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visitors
great inspiration for young age
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local
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people
.

In contrast
,
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International
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visitors
have
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some
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negative
side
also
, which is affect native
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people
.
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Some
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visitors
have
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bad
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habit
, they try to damage historical
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place
.
For example
,
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many
quotes, written in
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tourists
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places
.
Moreover
,
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some
youngsters influenced on
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tourist
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wrong
lifestyle. All
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bad
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habits
which are
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attract
to youngsters
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so
they try to copy that. To illustrate, smoking and drugging are
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bad
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habits
most affective in
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youngster
most of this kind
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habit
might be
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expand
due to tourism.

To conclude
,
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international
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tourists
beneficial
as well
as problematic for
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local
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people
. Economic benefits and increase
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local
growth, while
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some
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visitors
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habit
and activities affect all the tourism industry in all over the globe.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
51Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays people visit country as a international tourists. describe advantages and disadvantages. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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