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Nowadays, people use social media to keep up with the news. Why do they do this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative trend? v.4

Nowadays, people use social media to keep up with the news. Why do they do this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative trend? v. 4
These days access to digital information is greater than it ever was, thanks to our connection to the internet. Many people utilize this connectivity to keep abreast of local and global events via social media. This essay will highlight the prominent reason is convenient for the proliferation of such a trend as well as explain my belief that it is positive due to access to instant information. Despite there are multiple reasons, the most obvious reason for numerous people subscribing to these channels is that they are interested in a convenient mode of communication. There is a multitude of platforms, for instance Facebook, Twitter, and LinkedIn that automatically populates real-time updates in consumer news feeds section. Although subscribers can customize their feeds, built-in artificial intelligence algorithms display breaking stories based on previous browsing history. To sum up, people find it easier to download, subscribe and use social networks. In my viewpoint, this increasing trend offers a paramount amount of benefits which eclipse its drawbacks. To exemplify, the public gets to know what is happening not only in their local region but also in other countries instantly. In comparison to traditional newspapers (whether paper or digital) and magazines, social media networks provide better opportunities to see what friends and families are reading and liking as they share and like the articles. This is an extremely beneficial widespread approach to stay updated about news. In conclusion, the chief justification for social media being used by many people for the world events is its ease of use. I believe overall it is a positive trend as it is crucial to know what is happening around the globe. In future, it will expand enormously and rapidly.
These days access to digital information is greater than it ever was, thanks to our connection to the internet.
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Many
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people
utilize this connectivity to
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keep
abreast of local and global
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events
via
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social
media. This essay will highlight the prominent reason is convenient for the proliferation of such a trend
as well
as
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explain
my belief that it is
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positive
due to access to instant information.

Despite there are multiple reasons, the most obvious reason for numerous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
subscribing to these channels is that they
are interested
Consider replacing "in a convenient mode" with the adverb for "convenient"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a convenient mode
of communication. There is a multitude of platforms,
for instance
Facebook, Twitter, and LinkedIn that
automatically
populates real-time updates in consumer news feeds section. Although subscribers can customize their feeds, built-in artificial intelligence algorithms display breaking stories based on previous browsing history. To sum up,
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people
find it easier to download, subscribe and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
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social
networks.

In my viewpoint, this increasing trend offers a paramount amount of benefits which eclipse its drawbacks. To exemplify, the public
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gets
to know what is happening not
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only
in their local region
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but
also
in other countries
instantly
.
In comparison
to traditional newspapers (whether paper or digital) and magazines,
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social
media networks provide better opportunities to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
what friends and families are reading and liking as they share and like the articles. This is an
extremely
beneficial widespread approach to stay updated about news.

In conclusion
, the chief justification for
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social
media being
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used
by
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many
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people
for the world
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events
is its
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ease
of
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use
. I believe
overall
it is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
trend as it is crucial to know what is happening around the globe.
Did you mean: "In the future"?
In future
, it will expand
enormously
and
rapidly
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, people use social media to keep up with the news. Why do they do this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative trend? v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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