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Nowadays people show more anti-social behaviour and lack of respect to others. What are the causes? How could we improve the situation? v.2

Nowadays people show more anti-social behaviour and lack of respect to others. What are the causes? How could we improve the situation? v. 2

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IELTS essay Nowadays people show more anti-social behaviour and lack of respect to others. What are the causes? How could we improve the situation? v. 2

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American English

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

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