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Nowadays, people get information through news and papers, but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news. Should we believe the journalists? What qualities should a good journalist or correspondent have?

Nowadays, people get information through news and papers, but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news. Should we believe the journalists? What qualities should a good journalist or a correspondent have? v. 2
Of late, news and papers are one of the major sources of information which are being accessed by people. However, it is believed by some that the authenticity of this is subjective. In my opinion, we ought to trust the journalists, provided they represent an authentic source and are unbiased. In addition, there are other qualities, which plays a vital role in defining a reliable journalist. We should have confidence in journalism but blind trust even in the case of reputable newspapers or any other source could be detrimental. Today, there are countless fake and satire sources that the public mistake for genuine sources. The study says that only 30% of readers access the details section of a headline. This plays an important role in making a large percentage of the audience believe a certain mindset. Thus, it is extremely essential for readers to validate the source and authenticity of every piece of news. A reliable journalist must be free from political bias. He should be un-favourable to any political party. side of a story. For example, He should not hurt sentiments of any particular community as the reader could belong to any race, caste or faith. Moreover, the Public must be aware of the true picture of an event and happening rather than fake or unreal. Furthermore, whenever possible, correspondents should strive for a balance in the news that could be acceptable for all age brackets. For Instance, it will be really difficult for children to develop an interest in the news if it only showcases violence and the negative side of society. Therefore, it is significant to be versatile and understand your audience. In conclusion, we should believe in journalist but in parallel authenticity should be checked as well. As far as a good journalist is concerned, one should be unbiased and versatile in personality.
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.
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that the authenticity of this is subjective. In my opinion, we ought to trust the
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journalists
, provided they represent an authentic
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source
and
are unbiased
.
In addition
, there are other qualities, which plays a vital role in defining a reliable journalist.

We should have confidence in journalism
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but
blind trust even in the case of reputable newspapers or any other
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source
could be detrimental.
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Today
, there are countless fake and satire
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sources
that the public mistake for genuine
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sources
. The study says that
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only
30% of readers access the
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details
section of a headline. This plays an
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important
role in making a large percentage of the audience believe a certain mindset.
Thus
, it is
extremely
essential for readers to validate the
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source
and authenticity of every piece of news.

A reliable
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journalist
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must
be free from political bias. He should be
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un-favourable
to any political party.
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side
of a story.
For example
, He should not hurt sentiments of any particular community as the reader could belong to any race, caste or faith.
Moreover
, the Public
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must
be aware of the true picture of an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
and happening
rather
than fake or unreal.

Furthermore
, whenever possible, correspondents should strive for a balance in the news that could be acceptable for all age brackets.
For Instance
, it will be
really
difficult for children to develop an interest in the news if it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
showcases violence and the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
side of society.
Therefore
, it is significant to be versatile and understand your audience.

In conclusion
, we should believe in
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journalist
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but
in parallel authenticity should be
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checked
as well
. As far as a
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good
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journalist
is concerned
, one should
be unbiased
and versatile in personality.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, people get information through news and papers, but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news. Should we believe the journalists? What qualities should a good journalist or correspondent have?

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5 paragraphs
307 words
6.5
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