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Nowadays, people get information through news and papers, but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news. Should we believe the journalists? What qualities should a good journalist or a correspondent have? v.4

Nowadays, people get information through news and papers, but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news. Should we believe the journalists? What qualities should a good journalist or a correspondent have? v. 4
Currently, new broadcasts have become very easy and quick. So people get details by reporting and rag, but for the present journalists are precarious about the honestly on the news. There are some qualities should a good columnist should have, its elobrate in further. First of all, opine that journalism is not easy as they have to risk their life and work hard to update their reader and viewer about different information, so people should admit their work and confidence increase by trusting them. So, they can also make mistakes but these are not intentional and counting errors should be given to them. Moreover, most of errors are from the owners and media, so this should not affect the creadit of newsman. For instance, recently in delhi, well known newspepar published some news about politics which later on proved false, on investigation the fault was of reader not the journalist. The reporter should also take responsibility to win the trust of followers by taking some qualities. Firstly, they should have proper knowledge of their field, as some people are joining media without having knowledge of this field and the result is they can not success in their field. Secondly, they should do research about each and every news before presenting on television or newspaper. Because, everyone wants real news not breaking news. For example, many research illustrate in media world, have shown that there are major difference between professional broadcaster and non professional broadcaster. To conclude, recently people believes only those person who have correctness in their soul and media persons have it because, they are collecting the news to do hard work and they are putting their life in risk. So we should trust on pressman.
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,
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broadcasts have become
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easy and quick.
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So
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people
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get
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details
by reporting and rag,
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but
for the present journalists are precarious about the
honestly
on the
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news
. There are
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some
qualities should a
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good
columnist should have, its
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elobrate
in
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have to
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risk
their
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life
and work
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hard
to update their reader and viewer about
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different
information,
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so
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people
should admit their work and confidence increase by trusting them.
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So
, they can
also
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make
mistakes
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but
these are not intentional and counting errors should be
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given
to them.
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,
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most of errors
are from the owners and
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media
,
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so
this should not affect the
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of newsman.
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, recently in
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delhi
, well known
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newspepar
published
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some
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news
about politics which later on proved false, on investigation the fault was of reader not the journalist.

The reporter should
also
take responsibility to win the trust of followers by taking
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some
qualities.
Firstly
, they should have proper knowledge of their field, as
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some
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people
are joining
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media
without having knowledge of this field and the result is they
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can not success
in their field.
Secondly
, they should do research about each and every
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news
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before
presenting on television or newspaper.
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Because
, everyone wants real
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news
not breaking
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news
.
For example
,
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many research
illustrate in
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media
world, have shown that there are major difference between professional broadcaster and
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non professional
broadcaster.

To conclude
, recently
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people
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believes
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only
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those person
who have correctness in their soul and
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media
persons have it
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because
, they are collecting the
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news
to do
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hard
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work and
they are putting their
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life
in
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risk
.
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So
we should trust on pressman.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays, people get information through news and papers, but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news. Should we believe the journalists? What qualities should a good journalist or a correspondent have? v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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