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Nowadays people get information through news and papers but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news Should we believe the journalists What qualities should a good journalist or a correspondent have v.5

Nowadays people get information through news and papers but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news Should we believe the journalists What qualities should a good journalist or a correspondent have v. 5
It is an irrefutable that now a day, The trend of the smoking among people is increasing rapidly. Some people assert that the smoking is not good for health and it should not be allowed to smog in public areas. In my opinion, I totally agree with the statement and in this essay, I intend to support my views before conclusion can be drawn. There are several reasons for this. The first and foremost is that the smoking is injurious to the health, but there is no doubt, the smoking in-front of other folks is also having the same effects as active smokers. For an instance, According to the survey, 70 percent of The Cancer problems caused by the visible vapours and 50 percent of the passive people have the same health issues such as breathing, stomach which is found in the active smokers. On the contrary side, To reduce the bad impact of the smoking, The cigarette companies introduce the alternate option that is vape-pencil. In a research found that the vape-pen is less harmful as compared to cigarettes. Moreover, other side The Government gives fines for the smokers who vapor in public space. In addition, Also Request to the building contractors to install the fog detector in each building and defined designated area for smokers. To put in a nutshell, I pen down and say that it is better to encourage everyone and aware not to most in public areas, instead of putting someone’s life in danger zone.
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now
a day, The trend of the
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smoking
among
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people
is increasing
rapidly
.
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Some
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people
assert that the
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smoking
is not
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good
for health and it should not be
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allowed
to smog in public areas. In my opinion, I
totally
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agree
with the statement and in this essay, I intend to support my views
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before
conclusion can
be drawn
.

There are several reasons for this. The
first
and foremost is that the
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smoking
is injurious to the health,
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but
there is no doubt, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
smoking
in-front of other folks is
also
having the same effects as active smokers. For an instance, According to the survey, 70 percent of The Cancer problems caused by the visible
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vapours
and 50 percent of the passive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
have the same health issues such as breathing, stomach which
is found
in the active smokers.

On the contrary
side, To
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reduce
the
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bad
impact of the
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smoking
, The cigarette
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companies
introduce the alternate option
that is
vape-pencil. In
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a research
found that the vape-pen is less harmful as compared to cigarettes.
Moreover
, other side The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Government
gives fines for the smokers who vapor in public space.
In addition
,
Also
Request to the building contractors to install the fog detector in each building and defined designated area for smokers.

To put in a nutshell, I pen down and say that it is better to encourage everyone and aware not to most in public areas,
instead
of putting someone’s life in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
danger
zone.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Nowadays people get information through news and papers but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news Should we believe the journalists What qualities should a good journalist or a correspondent have v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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