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Nowadays people can buy a large variety of household goods, more than ever before in most countries in the world. Is this a good or bad development? Give your opinion and examples. v.4

Nowadays people can buy a large variety of household goods, more than ever before in most countries in the world. Is this a good or bad development? Give your opinion and examples. v. 4
In the era of globalization, there is no doubt that the accessibility of household goods is higher than ever. However, I opine that this trend has more benefits than disadvantages. This essay will illustrate why this is a phenomenon is a positive development and states few arguments that support this opinion. In modern days, the ease of availability and competitive pricing has made homely goods a part of everyone’s life. The main advantages of these goods is that, they save a lot of time by performing tasks with utmost efficiency. The things that are done without the use of these goods consume more time and energy than comparable to doing it with the help of these devices. For example, washing machines nowadays clean and dry the clothes with just a single input, consequentially reducing even the slightest amount of human effort. Furthermore, the enormous purchases of these appliances would be a boon to the economy as the currency is circulated in the market. This will create more employment opportunities in the production industry and therefore resulting in a stable economy. In addition to this, the availability of these household items such as air-conditioning, the washing machine will improve the living standards of the citizen of the nation. For instance, the United State of America, the biggest market of consumer goods, has enabled strong economical and holistic growth of the nation. In conclusion, this essay explains why the increase of utilization of home goods is a positive development. Although there might be many certain demerits, the advantages they give in terms of comfortable life and the stable economy are the prominent reasons why this has been a positive development.
In the era of globalization, there is no doubt that the accessibility of household
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goods
is higher than ever.
However
, I opine that this trend has more benefits than disadvantages. This essay will illustrate why this is a phenomenon is a
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positive
development and states few arguments that support this opinion.

In modern days, the
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ease
of availability and competitive pricing has made homely
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goods
a part of everyone’s life. The main advantages of these
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goods
is that, they save
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a lot of
time by performing tasks with utmost efficiency. The things that
are done
without the
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use
of these
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goods
consume more time and energy than comparable to doing it with the
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help
of these devices.
For example
, washing machines nowadays clean and dry the clothes with
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just
a single input,
consequentially
reducing even the slightest amount of human effort.

Furthermore
, the enormous
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purchases
of these appliances would be a boon to the economy as the currency
is circulated
in the market. This will create more employment opportunities in the production industry and
therefore
resulting in a stable economy.
In addition
to this, the availability of these household items such as air-conditioning, the washing machine will
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improve
the living standards of the citizen of the nation.
For instance
, the United State of America, the biggest market of consumer
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goods
, has enabled strong economical and holistic growth of the nation.

In conclusion
, this essay
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explains
why the increase of utilization of home
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goods
is a
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positive
development. Although there might be
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many
certain demerits, the advantages they give in terms of comfortable life and the stable economy are the prominent reasons why this has been a
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positive
development.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Nowadays people can buy a large variety of household goods, more than ever before in most countries in the world. Is this a good or bad development? Give your opinion and examples. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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