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Nowadays it seems that people tend to wastea great amount of foodWhy do you think it is happening? How can we solve this problem v.2

Nowadays it seems that people tend to wastea great amount of foodWhy do you think it is happening? How can we solve this problem v. 2
It is true that in recent years, the amount of unused food which is thrown away tends to increase dramatically. The reason for this tendency are varied and there are some effective approaches that shoud be taken into actions to solve this problem. There are two main explanations why a great amount of food is being wasted. First, most individuals fail to have a thorough plan of what they are going to buy before they shop. As a matter of facts, many consumers only have vague ideas of what food products they might consume over the next few days. As a result, they are easily tempted to impulsively buy foodstuffs that are of littile use to them. Second, the unregulated cultivation of many different crops in many countries might surpass the demand for food of their citizens, which gradually results in an increase in the amount of superlflous food. For example, food wastage in Vietnam has become excessively prevalent in recent years because a great deal of fruit and vegetables such as watermelons or pineapples is cultivated and collected uncontrolably Some measures should be taken immediately to tackle this problem. Governments should adopt some appropriate policies which provide farmers and local food manufacturers with optimal conditions to export their products to other countries. By doing this, local enterprises will have coutless opportunities to approach prospective customers as wel as create brand awareness in the new markets, which greatly reduces the amount of wasted food and postively affecting the national economic expansion. Additionally, people should make a list of ingredients and foodstuffs that they are going to purchase before they shop. This would help consumers to have time to prepare and make a wise decision on what should be bought, eventually saving a great deal of money spent on unnecessary food products. In conclusion, there are several reasons why people tend to waste a large quantity of food and some effective measures should be taken into consideration to address this issue.
It is true that in recent years, the
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amount
of unused
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food
which
is thrown
away tends to increase
dramatically
. The reason for this tendency
are varied
and there are
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some
effective approaches that
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shoud
be taken
into actions to solve this problem.

There are two main explanations why a great
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amount
of
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food
is
being wasted
.
First
, most individuals fail to have a thorough plan of what they are going to
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buy
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before
they shop. As a matter of facts,
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many
consumers
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only
have vague
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ideas
of what
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food
products they might consume over the
next
few days.
As a result
, they are
easily
tempted to
impulsively
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buy
foodstuffs that are of
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littile
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use
to them. Second, the unregulated cultivation of
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many
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different
crops in
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many
countries might surpass the demand for
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food
of their citizens, which
gradually
results in an increase in the
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amount
of
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superlflous
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food
.
For example
,
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food
wastage in Vietnam has become
excessively
prevalent in recent years
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because
a great deal of fruit and vegetables such as watermelons or pineapples
is cultivated
and collected
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uncontrolably


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Some
measures should
be taken
immediately to tackle this problem.
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Governments
should adopt
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some
appropriate policies which provide farmers and local
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food
manufacturers with optimal conditions to export their products to other countries. By doing this, local enterprises will have
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coutless
opportunities to approach prospective customers as
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wel
as create brand awareness in the new markets, which
greatly
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reduces
the
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amount
of wasted
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food
and
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postively
affecting the national economic expansion.
Additionally
,
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people
should
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make
a list of ingredients and foodstuffs that they are going to
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purchase
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before
they shop. This would
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help
consumers to have time to prepare and
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make
a wise decision on what should be
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bought
,
eventually
saving a great deal of money spent on unnecessary
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food
products.

In conclusion
, there are several reasons why
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people
tend to waste a large quantity of
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food
and
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some
effective measures should
be taken
into consideration to address this issue.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays it seems that people tend to wastea great amount of foodWhy do you think it is happening? How can we solve this problem v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
330 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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