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Nowadays, it seems that people tend to waste a great amount of food. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem? v.2

Nowadays, it seems that people tend to waste a great amount of food. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem? v. 2
These days, it has become a trend to try different types of food varieties and if disliked, it is wasted. There are very many reasons for the development of these kinds of habits. I will explain them in detail and will also give some solutions to solve this problem. Primarily, with the economic growth in the countries, people are able to earn more wealth than earlier times. Which in turn allows them to spend on different things, one such expenditure is on food. One of the main causes of food wastage is available and costs far less. As traditional methods of cooking food at home has diminished, it has been replaced by cheaper and freely available meal choices. Though, they are usually unhealthy fast food, however as they are sold at cheaper prices, allows the public to try out and waste them if not liked. On the other hand, if some dish is prepared at home, even if it is not to your liking, even then one would not throw it away as it has been made with a lot of effort and time. Whereas, commonly sold foodstuff are brought without much thought and carelessly discarded. Another possible reason could be the new fashion diets cropping up day in day out, particularly affecting the female population to try these diets it order to get in shape. For example, girls who are on a protein diet for a week, jump over to a vegan diet, without giving much thought to all those protein products brought earlier to go into the bin. Though there are plenty more reasons, these are some basic causes discussed. With regards to the solution to this problem, I believe, parents need to instil in their children from a very young age not to waste food and give them some practical examples by they themselves following it. Moreover, they need to be informed, about poverty and underprivileged children and adults in many countries in Africa and Asia to name a few. In my view, even the government should encourage food banks and condemn wastage of food. With the consideration of the above reasons, one needs to learn to appreciate the availability of food on this planet and should not wasted rather shared through food banks throughout the community among the poor and homeless people. I reiterate, parents need to inculcate these habits in children from a very young age, which will go a long way and create a responsible society.
These days, it has become a trend to try
different
types of
food
varieties and if disliked, it
is wasted
. There are
very
many
reasons
for the development of these kinds of habits. I will
explain
them in detail and will
also
give
some
solutions to solve this problem.

Primarily
, with the economic growth in the countries,
people
are able to earn more wealth than earlier times. Which in turn
allows
them to spend on
different
things, one such expenditure is on
food
. One of the main causes of
food
wastage is available and costs far less. As traditional methods of cooking
food
at home has diminished, it has
been replaced
by cheaper and
freely
available meal choices. Though, they are
usually
unhealthy
fast
food
,
however
as they
are sold
at cheaper prices,
allows
the public to try out and waste them if not liked.
On the other hand
, if
some
dish
is prepared
at home, even if it is not to your liking, even then one would not throw it away as it has
been made
with
a lot of
effort and time. Whereas,
commonly
sold foodstuff
are brought
without much
thought
and
carelessly
discarded.

Another possible
reason
could be the new fashion diets cropping up day in day out,
particularly
affecting the female population to try these diets it
order
to
get
in shape.
For example
, girls who are on a protein diet for a week, jump over to a vegan diet, without giving much
thought
to all those protein products brought earlier to go into the bin. Though there are
plenty
more
reasons
, these are
some
basic causes discussed.

With regards to
the solution to this problem, I believe, parents
need
to
instil
in their children from a
very
young age not to waste
food
and give them
some
practical examples by they themselves following it.
Moreover
, they
need
to
be informed
, about poverty and underprivileged children and adults in
many
countries in Africa and Asia to name a few. In my view, even the
government
should encourage
food
banks and condemn wastage of food.

With the consideration of the above
reasons
, one
needs
to learn to appreciate the availability of
food
on this planet and should not
wasted
rather
shared through
food
banks throughout the community among the poor and homeless
people
. I reiterate, parents
need
to inculcate these habits in children from a
very
young age, which will go a long way and create a responsible society.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Nowadays, it seems that people tend to waste a great amount of food. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem? v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
412 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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