A crucial component of maintenance of human well being is being satisfied with their occupations, because most part of their adult life is spent at work. adequate renumeration and condusive working conditions are some of the factors contributing to job satisfaction. However, the idea cannot completely be achieved without imput of the employee.
There are several ways of satisfying workers. A major one is very stable and good salaries. Few people are not motivated by money, because the main purpose of working for most is to serve as a source of livelihood. Evidently, employees oftentimes seek higher income. In addition, good working conditions is also important. these include provision of adequate tools, due recognition for tasks well completed and health insurance. these will always entice people to remain with an establishment.
However, because what each person seek in form of job satisfaction differs, it is not feasible for employers to meet all expectations. it therefore depends largely on the individual employee yo be self-motivated. This can be attained by ensuring recruitment into the particular description of their ideal job, which is not always easy to find. Focussing on the benefits of their occupation rather than the negative factors also help in increase contentment with profession.
Summing up, people can be satisfied in their work with condusive work situations and better emolument, in order to maintain their good health. Nevertheless, each individual must try to adapt to their jobs or find another, since job satisfaction cannot be easily attained. 
A crucial component of maintenance of human  
well being
 is  
being satisfied
 with their occupations,  
because
 most part of their adult life  
is spent
 at work.  
adequate
  renumeration
 and  
condusive
 working conditions are  
some of the
 factors contributing to  
job
 satisfaction.  
However
, the  
idea
 cannot completely  
be achieved
 without  
imput
 of the employee.
There are several ways of satisfying workers. A major one is  
very
 stable and  
good
 salaries. Few  
people
 are not motivated by money,  
because
 the main purpose of working for most is to serve as a source of livelihood.  
Evidently
, employees oftentimes seek higher income.  
In addition
,  
good
 working conditions is  
also
  important
.  
these
 include provision of adequate tools, due recognition for tasks well completed and health insurance.  
these
 will always entice  
people
 to remain with an establishment. 
However
,  
because
 what each person seek in form of  
job
 satisfaction differs, it is not feasible for employers to  
meet
 all expectations.  
it
  therefore
 depends  
largely
 on the individual employee  
yo
 be self-motivated. This can  
be attained
 by ensuring recruitment into the particular description of their ideal  
job
, which is not always easy to find. Focussing on the benefits of their occupation  
rather
 than the  
negative
 factors  
also
  help
 in increase contentment with profession.
Summing up,  
people
 can  
be satisfied
 in their work with  
condusive
 work situations and better emolument, in order to maintain their  
good
 health.  
Nevertheless
, each individual  
must
 try to adapt to their  
jobs
 or find another, since  
job
 satisfaction cannot be  
easily
 attained. 
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