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Nowadays, it seems that people tend to waste a great amount of food. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem? v.1

Nowadays, it seems that people tend to waste a great amount of food. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem? v. 1
These days, people are buying a lot of food which ends up being thrown away. The essay below will analyze some major reasons for this situation, and measures to tackle this problem will be presented. There are two main explanations why food is being wasted. One of the reasons food is thrown away is because consumers fail to have a thorough plan of what they are going to buy before they shop. Commonly, many people only have vague ideas of what meals or foodstuffs they might consume over the next few days, and this often leads to their shopping carts full of products they might never use. Secondly, food wastage can occur when people make poor choices for their diet. Huge quantities of food remaining unused might be a sign that consumers’ diets are going undesirably. Some measures are suggested to mitigate the situation. One effective solution is to make a list of ingredients and foodstuffs that one is going to purchase before she goes shopping. This way helps consumers to have time to prepare and decide wisely what products should be bought, which eventually saves a lot of unnecessary food. Furthermore, people should do careful research on reasonable diets in advance of going to food stores so that they can know what ingredients are best for their state of health. In conclusion, poor planning for meals and unwise choices of diet mainly contribute to the amount of unused food at the moment, and thorough preparation is key to avoid further food wastage.
These days,
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people
are buying
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a lot of
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food
which ends up
being thrown
away. The essay below will analyze
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some
major reasons for this situation, and measures to tackle this problem will
be presented
.

There are two main explanations why
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food
is
being wasted
. One of the
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reasons
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food
is thrown
away is
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because
consumers fail to have a thorough plan of what they are going to
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buy
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before
they shop.
Commonly
,
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many
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people
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only
have vague
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ideas
of what meals or foodstuffs they might consume over the
next
few days, and this
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often
leads to their shopping carts full of products they might never
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use
.
Secondly
,
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food
wastage can occur when
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people
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make
poor choices for their diet. Huge quantities of
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food
remaining unused might be a
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sign
that consumers’ diets are going
undesirably
.

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Some
measures
are suggested
to mitigate the situation. One effective solution is to
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make
a list of ingredients and foodstuffs that one is going to
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purchase
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before
she goes shopping. This way
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helps
consumers to have time to prepare and decide
wisely
what products should be
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bought
, which
eventually
saves
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a lot of
unnecessary
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food
.
Furthermore
,
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people
should do careful research on reasonable diets in advance of going to
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food
stores
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so
that they can know what ingredients are best for their state of health.

In conclusion
, poor planning for meals and unwise choices of diet
mainly
contribute to the amount of unused
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food
at the moment, and thorough preparation is key to avoid
further
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food
wastage.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays, it seems that people tend to waste a great amount of food. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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