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Nowadays for many people the Internet is replacing regular books. What do you think will happen in the future and what is your opinion about this trend? v.5

Nowadays for many people the Internet is replacing regular books. What do you think will happen in the future and what is your opinion about this trend? v. 5
In the last two decades, the development of technology has enabled people to read ebook on screen rather than read regular books. It is interesting to speculate what will happen in the future with high-speed developing internet technology. This essay will delve the prediction and evaluate the trend. In my wildest imagination, there will be no demand for actural books. In the future, people all read on screen due to the convenience of internet. People do not need to carry a book to read, instead people read on screen of portable device. In addition, people will abandon the habit of borrowing book from library because readers can download enormous books from internet. Consequently, people in the future totally live in a paper-free world. In deed, I am worried about the trend of paper-free world. As far as I know, children will suffer from nearsight after reading frequently on screen for long period. A report states that 80% of adolescents in China are nearsighted as a result of excessive use of cellphone. If children in the future learn on screen, a majority of population will wear glasses. This trend impacts me in core because I have nearsighted eyes. In summary, the advancing internet technology definitly alter the way people read in the future. As a consequence, the next era will be paperless, which benefits the majority but is detrimental to eyes of youngsters.
In the last two decades, the development of technology has enabled
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read
regular
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books
. It is interesting to speculate what will happen in the
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future
with high-speed developing internet technology. This essay will delve the prediction and evaluate the trend.

In my wildest imagination, there will be no demand for
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actural
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books
. In the
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future
,
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people
all
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read
on
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screen
due to the convenience of internet.
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do not need to carry a
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book
to
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read
,
instead
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people
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read
on
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screen
of portable device.
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,
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people
will abandon the habit of borrowing
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book
from library
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because
readers can download enormous
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books
from internet.
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,
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people
in the
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future
totally
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live
in a paper-free world.

In deed, I
am worried
about the trend of paper-free world. As far as I know, children will suffer from
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nearsight
after reading
frequently
on
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screen
for long period. A report states that 80% of adolescents in China
are nearsighted
as a result
of excessive
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use
of cellphone. If children in the
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future
learn on
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screen
, a majority of population will wear glasses. This trend impacts me in core
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because
I have nearsighted eyes.

In summary, the advancing internet technology
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definitly
alter the way
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people
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read
in the
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future
. As a consequence, the
next
era will be paperless, which benefits the majority
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is detrimental to eyes of youngsters.
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28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Nowadays for many people the Internet is replacing regular books. What do you think will happen in the future and what is your opinion about this trend? v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
232 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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