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Nowadays families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this Explain the reasons for this and discuss any possible effects it may have on society v.1

Nowadays families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this Explain the reasons for this and discuss any possible effects it may have on society v. 1
The end of colonial era does not stop English language from continuing its authority on global stage. And it is a guaranteed fact that it will continue to do so for many decades to come if not centuries. This essay will argue and prove how negligible is the negative aspects that is being attributed to this beautiful tool of communication. On the one hand, English as a communication tool is accused of being the reason behind the vanishing of many languages, cultures and traditions from the time of its entrance on foreign soil since the beginning of colonialism. This accusation, to a large extend is valid, considering the reality that the majority of transactions happening in the trading sector around the world is in this dialect for a long time. It resulted in non-English speakers choosing English over their own natural speech for survival, which in turn in the long run resulted in the disappearance of many indigenous languages and even way of life. On the other hand, any tongue which failed to grow in relevance are destined to die out or at least loss its sheen in the passage of time. Acknowledgment or an acceptance of preference by the common man is a proof of this inevitable end as they give importance to the practical reasons of life rather than emotions. English man’s terminology which predominantly used in different sectors like industrial trade, tourism, banking and many other sector for that matter is in an enviable position to be disregarded by any people or any country. So, to conclude, it is very clear that languages and related lifestyles, if not updated to the contemporary requirement can face a natural extinction. On the contrary, accusing other languages for one's failure is just like accepting the fact that one’s primary tool used to communicate is inferior to the other.
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of colonial era does not
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stop
English
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language
from continuing its authority on global stage.

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so
for
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many
decades to
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if not centuries. This essay will argue and prove how negligible is the
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negative
aspects
that is
being attributed
to this
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beautiful
tool of communication.

On the one hand, English as a communication tool
is accused
of being the reason behind the vanishing of
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many
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languages
, cultures and traditions from the time of its entrance on foreign soil since the beginning of colonialism. This accusation, to a large extend is valid, considering the reality that the majority of transactions happening in the trading sector around the world is in this dialect for a long time. It resulted in non-English speakers choosing English over their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
natural speech for survival, which in turn in the long run resulted in the disappearance of
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many
indigenous
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languages
and even way of life.

On the
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other
hand, any tongue which failed to grow in relevance
are destined
to
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die
out or at least loss its sheen in the passage of time. Acknowledgment or an acceptance of preference by the common
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man
is a proof of this inevitable
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as they give importance to the practical reasons of life
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than emotions. English
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man
’s terminology which
predominantly
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used
in
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different
sectors like industrial trade, tourism, banking and
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many
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other
sector for that matter is in an enviable position to
be disregarded
by any
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people
or any country.

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So
,
to conclude
, it is
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very
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clear
that
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languages
and related lifestyles, if not updated to the contemporary requirement can face a natural extinction.
On the contrary
, accusing
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other
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languages
for one's failure is
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just
like accepting the fact that one’s primary tool
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used
to communicate is inferior to the
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other
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
You can never understand one language until you understand at least two.
Geoffrey Willans

IELTS essay Nowadays families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this Explain the reasons for this and discuss any possible effects it may have on society v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
308 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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