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Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.3

Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. v. 3
There are numerous people who still insist on the speculation that Earth is one of the permanent objects which would remain stable for ever. They have expressed that although time passes and new generations come, new things appear etc, Earth by retaining its structure, chemical compounds, atmosphere and surface won' t alter. Contrary to popular belief, investigations have proved the fact that all the planets especially Earth that is home of animal kingdom are constantly changing. Global warming is one of the noticeable changes in the world tempertures that has arisen mainly from the increased amount of greenhouse gases which can trap the heat received from the sun that otherwise would escape from the Earth. Carbon dioxide emissions from burning fossil fuels or from extreme deforestation and even the sudden rise in methene caused by agriculture and animal husbandry can beget such a huge and harmful impact on the atmosphere. Geologist have fully perceived that Earth' s surface is not an exception and has been witness to some alterations in itself compared with twentieth century. Winds, gravity, glaciers, waters and above all climate change are known as the important environmental factors. For instance, erosion of rocks occurs mostly in the wake of perennial winds and water movement. Unnumbered mines have been discovered ever all over the world, but unfortunately, they haven' t been exploited accurately and legally and annual consumption of mineral extracted from the ground is soaring which indicates humans are disrupting their natural system. In conclusion, the passage of time and environmental factors are automatically changing the planets which could be good or bad, but in principle, the only possible way for human being is to slow it down by reducing the amount of greenhouse gases or by not abusing the mines in order to preserve our Earth!
There are numerous
people
who
still
insist on the speculation that
Earth
is one of the permanent objects which would remain stable for ever. They have expressed that although time passes and new generations
come
, new things appear etc,
Earth
by retaining its structure, chemical compounds, atmosphere and surface
won&
#039; t alter.

Contrary to popular belief, investigations have proved the fact that all the planets
especially
Earth
that is
home of animal kingdom are
constantly
changing.

Global warming is one of the noticeable
changes
in the world
tempertures
that has arisen
mainly
from the increased amount of greenhouse gases which can trap the heat received from the sun that
otherwise
would escape from the
Earth
. Carbon dioxide emissions from burning fossil fuels or from extreme deforestation and even the sudden rise in
methene
caused by agriculture and animal husbandry can beget such a huge and harmful impact on the atmosphere.

Geologist have
fully
perceived that
Earth&
#039; s surface is not an exception and has been witness to
some
alterations in itself compared with twentieth century. Winds, gravity, glaciers, waters and
above all
climate
change
are known
as the
important
environmental factors.
For instance
, erosion of rocks occurs
mostly
in the wake of perennial winds and water movement.

Unnumbered mines have
been discovered
ever all over the world,
but
unfortunately, they
haven&
#039; t
been exploited
accurately
and
legally
and annual consumption of mineral extracted from the ground is soaring which indicates humans are disrupting their natural system.

In conclusion
, the passage of time and environmental factors are
automatically
changing the planets which could be
good
or
bad
,
but
in principle, the
only
possible way for human being is
to
slow it down by reducing the amount of greenhouse gases or by not abusing the mines in order to preserve our
Earth
!
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. v. 3

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  American English
6 paragraphs
300 words
6.0
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