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Now that computers can very well translate all kinds of languages in the world, do we really need to learn more languages in future? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.1

Now that computers can very well translate all kinds of languages in the world, do we really need to learn more languages in future? v. 1
It is a universal fact that 21st century is the era of machines. From calculating, recording, online shopping, browsing to even translation of different kinds of languages in the world, there is nothing which a computer cannot do. One wonders, do we really need to learn languages in future. One needs to analyse both sides to come to a conclusion. Computers, complex yet highly useful can do anything, in which humans consume a lot of time. They can do it within seconds. Moreover, they can convert spoken language of one region to another. Which has made our work simpler and does not require us to put effort in actually studying and understanding the scripts of different parts. Especially, the ones who have related jobs, but do not have the space to study it. For example, many of the travellers do not have the interest in learning it, but just convert the dialogue whenever they want to. However, Human, being a social animal has taught himself to speak and converse in various ways with time. Language is the form of human behaviour which not only leads to the sharpness of the brain, but also helps in spreading knowledge by mastering the linguistic skills. Additionally, helping in understanding the origin and culture of that particular nation. For instance, history students take a deep interest in grasping the nuances of the various regions by first learning their language to understand about culture. If one relies too much on devices like computers for every art related work. It will lead to losing personal values of society in future. In conclusion, I would say, no matter how advance the world becomes, it cannot replace the human touch. Therefore, it is vital to learn languages of different countries which will keep our old civilisation alive.
It is a universal fact that 21st century is the era of machines. From calculating, recording, online shopping, browsing to even translation of
different
kinds of
languages
in the world, there is nothing which a computer cannot do. One wonders, do we
really
need to learn
languages
in future
. One needs to
analyse
both sides to
come
to a conclusion.

Computers, complex
yet
highly
useful can do anything, in which
humans
consume
a lot of
time. They can do it within seconds.
Moreover
, they can convert spoken
language
of one region to another. Which has made our work simpler and does not require us to put effort in actually studying and understanding the scripts of
different
parts.
Especially
, the ones who have related jobs,
but
do not have the space to study it.
For example
,
many
of the
travellers
do not have the interest in learning it,
but
just
convert the dialogue whenever they want to.

However
,
Human
, being a social animal has taught himself to speak and converse in various ways with time.
Language
is the form of
human
behaviour
which not
only
leads to the sharpness of the brain,
but
also
helps
in spreading knowledge by mastering the linguistic
skills
.
Additionally
, helping in understanding the origin and culture of that particular nation.
For instance
, history students take a deep interest in grasping the nuances of the various regions by
first
learning their
language
to understand about culture.

If one relies too much on devices like computers for every art related work. It will lead to losing personal values of society
in future
.

In conclusion
, I would say, no matter how advance the world becomes, it cannot replace the
human
touch.
Therefore
, it is vital to learn
languages
of
different
countries which will
keep
our
old
civilisation
alive.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Now that computers can very well translate all kinds of languages in the world, do we really need to learn more languages in future? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
299 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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