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now a days some people think that public libraries are not necessary while other disagree. discuss both the views and give your own opinions and examples v.1

now a days some people think that public libraries are not necessary while other disagree. 1
Libraries are the creek of knowledge which fascinates the bibliophilic, since the digital era is prevailing some people oppose that libraries are not compulsory. In my opinion, statefunded libraries certainly have become less important than they used to be; however, I cannot support the argument that they are no longer important. To begin with, the information technology has made the public libraries less imperative, The primary reason behind that is information can be easily accessed on internet in a fraction of second without carrying heavy voluminous books, whereas in library people have to search a number of books thoroughly on a Particular topic. Moreover travel to an athenaeum in a chock full roads is being time consuming and exhausting, for an instance if a person desires to seek an economic book, he will prefer to search information sites like google, Wikipedia, pubmed and Oxford Dictionary, Needless to say people who have constant access to internet no longer visit to athenaeum. On the other hand, public libraries still serve some valuable purpose, beyond doubt the online facts are new and available on single click conversely libraries have impressive collection of old manuscripts which are not available online by contrast, information found online can be unreliable or false because there is no one to check the veracity of data posted online. For this reason, libraries are still the best source of information for research scholars. Libraries also provide a quiet environment where students can read without facing any distractions. In conclusion, there is no denying the fact that public libraries is becoming tedious while technology has developed and has granted humans opportunities to get access to information quickly. Even so, they are still needed because information stored in a library is always reliable or accurate and it is irrefutable that the concentrating environment is only available at libraries.
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, since the digital era is prevailing
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oppose that libraries are not compulsory. In my opinion,
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statefunded
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important
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important
.

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begin
with, the
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information
technology has made the public libraries less imperative, The primary reason behind
that is
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information
can be
easily
accessed on internet in a fraction of second without carrying heavy voluminous books, whereas in library
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people
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have to
search a number of books
thoroughly
on a Particular topic.
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Moreover
travel to an
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athenaeum
in a
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chock full
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roads
is being
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time consuming
and exhausting, for an instance if a person desires to seek an economic book, he will prefer to search
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information
sites like google, Wikipedia,
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pubmed
and Oxford Dictionary, Needless to say
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people
who have constant access to internet no longer visit to
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athenaeum
.

On the other hand
, public libraries
still
serve
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some
valuable purpose, beyond doubt the
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online
facts are new and available on single click
conversely
libraries have impressive collection of
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old
manuscripts which are not available
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online
by contrast,
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information
found
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online
can be unreliable or false
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because
there is no one to
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check
the veracity of data posted
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online
.
For this reason
, libraries are
still
the best source of
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information
for research scholars. Libraries
also
provide a quiet environment where students can read without facing any distractions.

In conclusion
, there is no denying the fact that public libraries is becoming tedious while technology has developed and has granted humans opportunities to
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get
access to
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information
quickly
. Even
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so
, they are
still
needed
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because
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information
stored in a library is always reliable or accurate and it is irrefutable that the concentrating environment is
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only
available at libraries.
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11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay now a days some people think that public libraries are not necessary while other disagree. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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