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Now a days some people think that libraries are not necessary, while other disagree. Both views and give your own opinion and example. v.1

Now a days some people think that libraries are not necessary, while other disagree. Both views and give your own opinion and example. v. 1
Libraries have been a source of information and entertainment for years. With easy access to electronic books over the internet many open that public libraries are no longer required, however many other contradict stating the essential. Both the views are discussed in enjoying the paragraph along with personal opinion. To begin with, public libraries are generally centrally placed, getting to them requires commuting to their place of location. People find it difficult, as with the internet, study material of any type such as textbooks, novels are easily available online, sitting at their own place. Furthermore, libraries are open for specific hours a day, limiting their access. Moreover, searching for books on long shelves of library hall is a tedious task, requires referring to a number of indexes to search a required book. Hence, the aforementioned off-putting factors are responsible for a decrease in the popularity of public libraries, making there future need doubtful. However, libraries have always been famous among individuals seeking a peaceful and isolated environment for study. With so many destructions at home people generally, find it difficult to focus at their dwellings; for both pieces of knowledge seek and bibliophiles no place is better than a library. In addition to this, the government managed libraries are free to the source of knowledge for many educatees. In developing countries such as Bangladesh, India where internet accessibility and penetration is minimal, public libraries are a must. In addition to this, libraries hold authenticated study materials, with the leisure of books holding historical and contemporary references. Thus, it is evident that libraries are important components of social infrastructure. To conclude, in my opinion, libraries are the essential requirement of any society, the books they contain hold literary and historical treasures. Also, their presence comforts the life of persons seeking knowledge, along with those part taking book reading as a hobby. Thus, the need for government-managed libraries is unquestionable.
Libraries have been a source of information and entertainment for years. With easy access to electronic
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books
over the internet
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many
open that
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public
libraries are no longer required,
however
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many
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other
contradict stating the essential. Both the views
are discussed
in enjoying the paragraph along with personal opinion.

To
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begin
with,
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public
libraries are
generally
centrally
placed, getting to them requires commuting to their place of location.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
find it difficult, as with the internet, study material of any type such as textbooks, novels are
easily
available online, sitting at their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
place.
Furthermore
, libraries are open for specific hours a day, limiting their access.
Moreover
, searching for
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books
on long shelves of library hall is a tedious task, requires referring to a number of indexes to search a required
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book
.
Hence
, the aforementioned off-putting factors are responsible for a decrease in the popularity of
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public
libraries, making there future need doubtful.

However
, libraries have always been
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famous
among individuals seeking a peaceful and isolated environment for study. With
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so
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many
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destructions at
home
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people
generally
, find it difficult to focus at their dwellings; for both pieces of knowledge seek and bibliophiles no place is better than a library.
In addition
to this, the
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government
managed libraries are free to the source of knowledge for
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many
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educatees
. In
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developing countries
such as Bangladesh, India where internet accessibility and penetration is minimal,
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public
libraries are a
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must
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
addition to this, libraries hold authenticated study materials, with the leisure of
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books
holding historical and contemporary references.
Thus
, it is evident that libraries are
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important
components of social infrastructure.

To conclude
, in my opinion, libraries are the essential requirement of any society, the
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books
they contain hold literary and historical treasures.
Also
, their presence comforts the life of persons seeking knowledge, along with those part taking
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book
reading as a hobby.
Thus
, the need for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
-managed libraries is unquestionable.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Now a days some people think that libraries are not necessary, while other disagree. Both views and give your own opinion and example. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
318 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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