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now a days advance in technology and traslation software people no longer need to learn new languages to communicate to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement v.2

now a days advance in technology and traslation software people no longer need to learn new languages to communicate with this statement v. 2
It is undeniable, technology has growing up like a jet speed and we have a pleathora of translater software in this current morden generation. Some of them belief that we need to learn many languages by a section of counter people. I am of the opinion who is going to debate this mater before any conclusion can be drawn. On the other hand, there are many translater devices which are available in the current market that we can get it anywhere in the wrold easily. For example, google translater is available using that we can easily communicate with anyone from one language to any other languages and we can easily convert it. Eventhough, mobile device which one translater app is available and anyone can using that talk to any languages and i really agree that will help our business in globalization level, and we can market it our products anywhere in the world without knowing their languages. On the one hand, however, many traslaters comes in the market we should learn ourself to know other languages in order to improve our communication skills. Main gact is that we should not always depend up on only technologies otherwise we can not do anything. For instance, my colleque who went to Cuba for his business work and unfortunately, he did not know that devices will not work in that country and computer also with lot of restrictions so he unable to communicate in the business meeting and who suffered lot to maintain his business. Finally, he learnt their own languages. To summarize this, technologies are always important our life to use it our current life but main important is we should learn ourself so that we can survey anywhere. We should always trust ourself not wit the gadgets.
It is undeniable, technology has growing up like a jet
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speed and
we have a
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pleathora
of
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translater
software in this
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current
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morden
generation.
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Some
of them
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belief
that we need to learn
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many
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languages
by a section of counter
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people
. I am of the opinion who is going to debate this mater
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before
any conclusion can
be drawn
.

On the other hand
, there are
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many
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translater
devices which are available in the
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current
market that we can
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get
it anywhere in the
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wrold
easily
.
For example
, google
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translater
is available using that we can
easily
communicate with anyone from one
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language
to any other
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languages and
we can
easily
convert it.
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Eventhough
, mobile device which one
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translater
app is available and anyone can
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using
that talk to any
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languages
and
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i
really
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agree
that will
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help
our
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business
in globalization level, and we can market it our products anywhere in the world without knowing their languages.

On the one hand,
however
,
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many
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traslaters
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comes
in the market we should learn
The term is non-standard and not widely accepted.
ourself
to know other
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languages
in order to
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improve
our communication
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skills
. Main
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gact
is that we should not always depend up on
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only
technologies
otherwise
we can not do anything.
For instance
, my
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colleque
who went to Cuba for his
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business
work and unfortunately, he did not know that devices will not work in that country and computer
also
with
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lot of
restrictions
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so
Did you mean "he is" or "he was"?
he
unable to communicate in the
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business
meeting and who suffered lot to maintain his
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business
.
Finally
, he
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learnt
their
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own
languages.

To summarize
this, technologies are always
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important
our life to
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use
it our
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current
life
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but
main
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important
is we should learn
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ourself
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so
that we can survey anywhere. We should always trust
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ourself
not wit the gadgets.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Mistakes

IELTS essay now a days advance in technology and traslation software people no longer need to learn new languages to communicate with this statement v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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