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Newspapers have influenced people’s ideas and opinions. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative situation? v.1

Newspapers have influenced people’s ideas and opinions. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative situation? v. 1
From a long time ago, newspapers have become an essential thing in our life. They have an influence on people’s ideas and opinions. From my perspective, newspapers bring both positive and negative impacts on humans. There are many reasons explained the influence of newspapers. First, people tend to follow the idea of articles. When writing an article, the writer usually pursues readers to agree with their ideas. Thus, if a person doesn’t have enough knowledge about the article, they can easily be convinced by the writer. Second, newspapers are convenient to access. Nowadays, people can read online newspapers everywhere and every time, which increases the rate of people reading newspapers. The more people reading newspapers, the more influential they are. On the one hand, newspapers do have positive effects on readers. They report fresh information and stories that happen around the world. These can inspire or encourage readers to donate to those who need help and understand what others are going through. For instance, many newspapers had reported about the fire in Australia, so it inspired people to donate to recover the losses caused by the fire. On the other hand, newspapers still have some drawbacks. There are many miserable articles about war, tragic or crime that is posted every day. Reading this news can make people have less trust in their country or encourage people to do dangerous things. In conclusion, there is no doubt that newspapers bring enormous positive impacts on humans. However, we should choose good sources to read newspapers to limit their negative effects.
From a long time ago,
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newspapers
have become an essential thing in our life. They have an influence on
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people’s
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ideas
and opinions. From my perspective,
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newspapers
bring both
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positive
and
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negative
impacts on humans.

There are
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many
reasons
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explained
the influence of
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newspapers
.
First
,
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people
tend to follow the
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idea
of
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articles
. When writing an
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article
, the writer
usually
pursues readers to
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agree
with their
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ideas
.
Thus
, if a person doesn’t have
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enough
knowledge about the
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article
, they can
easily
be convinced
by the writer. Second,
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newspapers
are convenient to access. Nowadays,
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people
can read online
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newspapers
everywhere and every time, which increases the rate of
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people
reading
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newspapers
. The more
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people
reading
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newspapers
, the more influential they are.

On the one hand,
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newspapers
do have
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positive
effects on readers. They report fresh information and stories that happen around the world. These can inspire or encourage readers to donate to those who need
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help
and understand what others are going through.
For instance
,
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many
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newspapers
had reported about the fire in Australia,
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so
it inspired
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people
to donate to recover the losses caused by the fire.
On the other hand
,
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newspapers
still
have
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some
drawbacks. There are
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many
miserable
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articles
about war, tragic or crime that
is posted
every day. Reading this news can
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make
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people
have less trust in their country or encourage
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people
to do
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dangerous
things.

In conclusion
, there is no doubt that
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newspapers
bring enormous
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positive
impacts on humans.
However
, we should choose
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good
sources to read
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newspapers
to limit their
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negative
effects.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Newspapers have influenced people’s ideas and opinions. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative situation? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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