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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v. 8
It is a fact that aIl colourful images are more powerful to gain viewer's attention because a picture speaks louder than a Thousands Words. So new stories on television and in many Newspapers and magazines try to add pictures to make news more productive. In my opinion, photos are more constructive than written words. First of all, nowadays life is very hectic and to rejuvenite themselves people like to watch news consequently, they would love to see pictorial representation In news instead of reading. Secondly, news with more colorful pictures tend to get more attention as compared to words because individuals do not like to spend too much time on the news despite they only want to know about the main story behind it. For examble, the latest by Hardwared University in 2020 has been proved that 80% people attract towards news because of detailed pictures. Moreover, as newspaper and magazines comes full of news but barely any person read the whole news. Resultantly, by adding more photographs and video clips can make news more understandable and to read the complete news. furthermore, without images in news will make people bored and it is like listening to the radio. Fare instance, in this modern era people are quite active on social media and through this they come to know about many important news. in the form of pictures Or short videos. Adding more, many newspapers Add children section on Sunday to attract younger audience and put some puzzle activities and comic stories. In conclusion. I believe it is necessary to add pictures in newspapers or TV news So that people can read and watch them and could mitigate their boredom.
It is a fact that
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aIl
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colourful
images are

more powerful to gain viewer's attention

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because
a picture speaks louder than
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a Thousands
Words.
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So
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new
stories on television and in
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many
Newspapers and magazines try to
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add


pictures to
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make
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news
more productive.

In my opinion, photos are more

constructive than written words.

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First of all
, nowadays

life is
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very
hectic

and to

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rejuvenite


themselves
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people


like to

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watch
news

consequently
, they would
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love
to

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see
pictorial representation In news

instead
of reading.
Secondly
,
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news
with more

colorful pictures tend to
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get


more

attention

as compared to words
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because
individuals

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do


not like to spend too much time on the

news despite they
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only
want to know about

the main story behind it. For
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examble
, the

latest

by
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Hardwared
University in 2020

has
been proved


that 80%
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people
attract

towards
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news
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because
of detailed pictures.

Moreover
, as newspaper and magazines
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comes


full of
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news
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but
barely


any person read the whole
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news
.
Resultantly
, by adding more photographs and video clips can
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make


news more understandable and to read the

complete
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news
.
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furthermore
, without images in

news will

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make
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people
bored and

it is like

listening to the radio. Fare instance, in this

modern era
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people
are

quite active on social

media and through this they
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come
to know about

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many
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important
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news
.
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in
the form of pictures

Or short videos. Adding more,
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many
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newspapers


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Add
children section on Sunday to attract

younger

audience and put
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some
puzzle activities and

comic stories.

In conclusion
. I believe it is necessary to

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add
pictures in newspapers or TV news

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So


that
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people
can read and
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watch
them and

could mitigate their boredom.
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IELTS essay News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
280 words
5.5
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