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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. Whats your opinion about it? v.28

News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. Whats your opinion about it? v. 28
In the recent day, the pictorial presentation has emerged as an effective way of communicating the messages to the society. There is a section of people, who believes that this is an impressive way to make people understand the gravity of the stories, whereas, another section of people feels that pictures of heinous acts are disturbing and negatively effect the kids. Keeping both sides of arguments into consideration, I feel that pictures should be a part of an article with some restrictions for particular types of reporting. The below paragraphs will discuss these arguments in detail and reach to a conclusion. Firstly, It is known fact that pictures speak more louder than the words. Some stories require innovative approaches to reach the masses and bring transformational changes in social lives. Drawing is that innovation in the editorial world, which has transformed the reporting ways. It also communicates the message with more clarity in less time. Furthermore, It would save time of the reader, as he can easily make out the intensity of the story by looking into the drawings without going through a half page of an article. For instance, It is always preferred to explain the logic by a pictorial representation in an exam. I had always taken this approach in my college days. However, certain heinous crimes like rape, murder should be avoided to present in pictorial style, as these pictures might be disturbing for certain readers in society, especially children and people with heart disease. It is medically proven that sensitive issues increase the heart beat and blood pressure in a rapid time, which might prove fatal to them. Keeping the purpose and approachability of news in mind and it is a paramount responsibility of the media to make sure that their stories should not have any adverse impact on the people. In conclusion, the pictorial representation of stories is a promising methodology to cascade the intended message to the community at a rapid pace. At the same time, the concerned authorities should have separate guidelines in place to make sure that the contents displayed in print media have no disturbing content for a section of viewers. Thus, the above explanation proves my opinion of usage of pictures to report the stories in newspapers and news channels.
In the recent day, the
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pictorial
presentation has emerged as an effective way of communicating the messages to the society. There is a section of
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people
, who believes that this is an impressive way to
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make
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people
understand the gravity of the
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stories
, whereas, another section of
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people
feels that
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pictures
of heinous acts are disturbing and
negatively
effect the kids. Keeping both sides of arguments into consideration, I feel that
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pictures
should be a part of an article with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
restrictions for particular types of reporting. The below paragraphs will discuss these arguments in detail and reach to a conclusion.

Firstly
, It
is known
fact that
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pictures
speak
Use only "louder" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
more louder
than the words.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stories
require innovative approaches to reach the masses and bring transformational
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
in social
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
. Drawing is that innovation in the editorial world, which has transformed the reporting ways. It
also
communicates the message with more clarity in less
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time
.
Furthermore
, It would save
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time
of the reader, as he can
easily
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
out the intensity of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
story
by looking into the drawings without going through a half page of an article.
For instance
, It is always preferred to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
the logic by a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pictorial
representation in an exam. I had always taken this approach in my college days.

However
, certain heinous crimes like rape, murder should
be avoided
to present in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pictorial
style, as these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pictures
might be disturbing for certain readers in society,
especially
children and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
with heart disease. It is
medically
proven that sensitive issues increase the heart beat and blood pressure in a rapid
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
, which might prove fatal to them. Keeping the purpose and
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approachability
of news in mind and it is a paramount responsibility of the media to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
sure that their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stories
should not have any adverse impact on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

In conclusion
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pictorial
representation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stories
is a promising methodology to cascade the intended message to the community at a rapid pace. At the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
, the concerned authorities should have separate guidelines in place to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
sure that the contents displayed in print media have no disturbing content for a section of viewers.
Thus
, the above explanation proves my opinion of usage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pictures
to report the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stories
in newspapers and news channels.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. Whats your opinion about it? v. 28

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
380 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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