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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v.24

News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v. 24
It is argued that photographs in news stories on television and newspapers are more efficient than words. I also personally think that pictures attract the people more than words. I will discuss my opinion in this essay. To begin with, pictures represent the internal news or information at a glance. After seeing a photograph people eagerly read or watch the news. For instance, I saw a picture on national newspaper such as Prothom Alo about the Math Olympiad. When I saw that photograph, then I realize that this competition would be held recently. After that I read the article until the end. Hence, the pictures give a basic understanding to the reader on a television screen or newspapers. Furthermore, by adding pictures on television news give a prediction about the news. For example, according to a survey by media association in Bangladesh more than 70 percent people like to watch news including pictures. There are some channels which telecast news with pictures as like Somoy TV which telecast all kinds of news are connected photographs. When a channel represents the new of flood one part of a country they required to display the pictures of the flooding area. Without any photos people do not get to observe the real condition of the places. So, photographs with the news on a television screen encourage the audience to watch the news. To sum up, including pictures in the news can play a vital role by attracting readers’ attention to a particular topic. The Picture also displays a story vividly and make easier to understand.
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is argued
that
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photographs
in
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stories on
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television
and newspapers are more efficient than words. I
also
personally
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think
that
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pictures
attract the
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people
more than words. I will discuss my opinion in this essay.

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begin
with,
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pictures
represent the internal
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news
or information at a glance. After seeing a
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photograph
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people
eagerly
read or
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watch
the
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news
.
For instance
, I
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saw
a
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picture
on national newspaper such as
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Prothom
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Alo
about the Math Olympiad. When I
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saw
that
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photograph
, then I realize that this competition would
be held
recently. After that I read the article until the
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end
.
Hence
, the
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pictures
give a basic understanding to the reader on a
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television
screen or newspapers.

Furthermore
, by adding
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pictures
on
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television
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news
give a prediction about the
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news
.
For example
, according to a survey by media association in Bangladesh more than 70 percent
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people
like to
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watch
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news
including
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pictures
. There are
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some
channels which telecast
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news
with
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pictures
as like
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Somoy
TV which telecast all kinds of
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news
are connected
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photographs
.
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When
a channel represents the
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new
of flood one part of a country they required to display the
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pictures
of the flooding area. Without any photos
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people
do not
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get
to observe the real condition of the places.
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So
,
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photographs
with the
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news
on a
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television
screen encourage the audience to
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watch
the news.

To sum up, including
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pictures
in the
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news
can play a vital role by attracting readers’ attention to a particular topic. The
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Picture
also
displays a story
vividly
and
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make
easier to understand.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v. 24

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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