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Some people believe that uniforms at work places aren’t necessary. Do you agree or disagree with it? Give your own opinion and include examples from your experience v.1

Some people believe that uniforms at work places aren’t necessary. with it? Give your own opinion and include examples from your experience v. 1
It is considered by many people that to wear a uniform on the job is imperative. Nowadays, where people are moving towards more and more flexible in their approaches, I opine that it would be very burdensome to wear a fixed pattern of dress everyday while going to work. Therefore, I do not agree with the persuasion stated in the first line. In the given essay, I have elaborated my reasons for not supporting the idea. To start with, where it is urged to employees to bring the creativity in the work, how is it possible to bind them in the fixed colour for all the days in a week? Though, generally many offices keep the Fridays as dress down day, and the workers can wear casuals of their own choices. For example, In my office, there is a small award given on a weekly basis to the best dressed person. Evidently, this encourages amongst people groom themselves. This way, not only workers are happy, but they are motivated also. Conversely, in the organisations, where it is made compulsory to wear uniforms, they are specific industries such as the automobile sector because they want to bring uniformity across their offices and manufacturing plants. For instance, Maruti company has a policy on the dress code, and each and every employee of the company, whether a high or low profile is required to follow it. To conclude, though there are various strategies to keep the employees in discipline for driving benefits, putting restriction on clothes does not make a huge difference. In my contemplation, people should wear what they admire and appreciate so that they feel elated for the whole day rather than feeling as a monotonous routine like a robot.
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a uniform on the job is imperative. Nowadays, where
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people
are moving towards more and more flexible in their approaches, I opine that it would be
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very
burdensome to
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wear
a
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pattern of dress
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everyday
while going to work.
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, I do not
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agree
with the persuasion stated in the
first
line. In the
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To
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with, where it
is urged
to employees to bring the creativity in the work, how is it possible to bind them in the
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fixed
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colour
for all the days in a week? Though,
generally
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offices
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keep
the Fridays as dress down day, and the workers can
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wear
casuals of their
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own
choices.
For example
, In my office, there is a
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small
award
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given
on a weekly basis to the best dressed person.
Evidently
, this encourages amongst
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people
groom themselves. This way, not
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only
workers are happy,
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but
they
are motivated
also
.

Conversely
, in the
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organisations
, where it
is made
compulsory to
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wear
uniforms, they are specific industries such as the automobile sector
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because
they want to bring uniformity across their offices and manufacturing plants.
For instance
,
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Maruti
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company
has a policy on the dress code, and each and every employee of the
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company
, whether a high or low profile
is required
to follow it.

To conclude
, though there are various strategies to
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keep
the employees in discipline for driving benefits, putting restriction on clothes does not
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make
a huge difference. In my contemplation,
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people
should
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wear
what they admire and appreciate
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so
that they feel elated for the whole day
rather
than feeling as a monotonous routine like a robot.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people believe that uniforms at work places aren’t necessary. with it? Give your own opinion and include examples from your experience v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
289 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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