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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v.19

News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v. 19
In the recent 60 years, there has been a great development in the field of photography. This development has always been considered as a positive change towards advancing our ability to describe news and share the stories behind them. Relevantly, the role of pictures is very critical in the media industry. For instance, it is usually more exciting to read an article that is accompanied by a relevant image. Such attachment between text and visuals is important as it provides a higher level of interpretation to the readers by constructing a sufficient link between the meanings and expressions. Moreover, sometimes people do not need text at all, as they can understand a certain situation by knowing the title of an image. This process occurs rapidly in the brain and the business world has started to recognize and utilize this fact since a very long time. On the other hand, the rapid changes in technology have allowed newspapers to develop online websites as portals for their news. This has enabled the use of videos, which are basically pictures that are in motion. Consequently, this has ultimately changed everything in the way we prepare and receive the news. Overall, the media corporations now have greater audience as they managed to attract new and different segments of the community who are using the internet. Additionally, now we can find many agencies that arrange and host photographing competitions. These initiatives allow people to demonstrate their skills and deliver a story at the same time. This provides companies with a huge advantage to make use of people's contributions by using them in articles, commercials, and videos
In the recent 60 years, there has been a great development in the field of photography. This development has always
been considered
as a
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positive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
towards advancing our ability to
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describe
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news
and share the stories behind them.

Relevantly
, the role of pictures is
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very
critical in the media industry.
For instance
, it is
usually
more exciting to read an article that
is accompanied
by a relevant image. Such attachment between text and visuals is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
as it provides a higher level of interpretation to the readers by constructing a sufficient link between the meanings and expressions.

Moreover
,
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sometimes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
do not need text at all, as they can understand a certain situation by knowing the title of an image. This process occurs
rapidly
in the brain and the business world has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to recognize and utilize this fact since a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
long time.

On the other hand
, the rapid
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
in technology have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
newspapers to develop online websites as portals for their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
. This has enabled the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of videos, which are
basically
pictures that are in motion.
Consequently
, this has
ultimately
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
everything in the way we prepare and receive the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
.
Overall
, the media corporations
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
have greater audience as they managed to attract
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
segments of the community who are using the internet.

Additionally
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
we can find
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
agencies that arrange and host photographing competitions. These initiatives
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to demonstrate their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and deliver a story at the same time. This provides
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
with a huge advantage to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's contributions by using them in articles, commercials, and
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videos
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v. 19

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
270 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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