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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v.17

News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v. 17
Nowadays, pictures are playing an indispensable part as graphical representation in news program and newspapers. It is argued that the diagrams have more influence than words. In my humble opinion, it is without any doubt a good and the vast growing idea of visual presentation of dictation. This essay will discuss different ideas on the topic with relevant examples. Firstly, people tend to the view news with visual proofs rather than only reading. To be more precise, if the news has a photo with it then people tend to read it first. For example, celebrity portraits get more attraction instead of any indispensable news. That is why, news with visual resources getting more popular. Secondly, including ample pictures increase the rate of sale of news. Owing to this, news maker adds more and more visuals in the news. In addition, it is a very easy way to understand the news. For instance, people of all ages can easily judge that how is in the news. Moreover, children are very fascinated of seeing pictures in newspapers. Turning to the other side of the topic, written information is also keeping keen significance because words describe the picture. Only graphical representation does not reveal the purpose of news. For example, picture without words are difficult to understand. So, both are equally crucial for publishing a news. To recapitulate, pictures are becoming increasing vital part of media news and news in the papers. I strongly agree with the idea of visual description of the news. It is recommended that more and more news should be present through graphical representation.
Nowadays,
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pictures
are playing an indispensable part as graphical representation in
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news
program and newspapers. It
is argued
that the diagrams have more influence than words. In my humble opinion, it is without any doubt a
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good
and the vast growing
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idea
of visual presentation of dictation. This essay will discuss
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different
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ideas
on the topic with relevant examples.

Firstly
,
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people
tend to the view
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news
with visual proofs
rather
than
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only
reading. To be more precise, if the
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news
has a photo with it then
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people
tend to read it
first
.
For example
, celebrity portraits
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get
more attraction
instead
of any indispensable
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news
.
That is
why,
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news
with visual resources getting more popular.

Secondly
, including ample
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pictures
increase the rate of sale of
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news
. Owing to this,
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news
maker
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adds
more and more
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visuals
in the
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news
.
In addition
, it is a
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very
easy way to understand the
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news
.
For instance
,
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people
of all ages can
easily
judge that how is in the
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news
.
Moreover
, children are
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very
fascinated of seeing
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pictures
in newspapers.

Turning to the other side of the topic, written information is
also
keeping keen significance
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because
words
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describe
the
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picture
.
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Only
graphical representation does not reveal the purpose of
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news
.
For example
,
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picture
without words are difficult to understand.
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So
, both are
equally
crucial for publishing
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a news
.

To recapitulate,
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pictures
are becoming increasing vital part of media
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news
and
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news
in the papers. I
strongly
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agree
with the
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idea
of visual description of the
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news
. It
is recommended
that more and more
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news
should be present through graphical representation.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v. 17

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
265 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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