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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v.13

News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v. 13
Many sources of media now use pictures to convey the news. Some people believe that these images are more effective than words. In my opinion, I agree that pictures are better to get the message across. One of the many benefits of photos are that It further substantiate the news by providing the evidence. As people nowadays are very critical about everything, so they need strong supportive visual representation in order to believe in some story. As a result, pictures with any news article strengthen the credibility of it. For instance, any earthquake or natural disaster news is accompanied by the photos of mass destruction, which can make rest of the population to feel how big calamity it was. Also, it will help them sympathize with their fellow brothers. Furthermore, in today's fast world, people do not have enough time to go through the whole article. Therefore, a photograph or a graphical representation can easily convey the required message without the need of many words. For instance, a line graph of economic growth over the years can be easier for a layman to comprehend. Also, some images or photographs can be used to gain the attention of people towards the news. Such as, some news channels compete to get the first exclusive picture of any event, like an award show or movie premiere or any social event, so that they can have audience attention. In conclusion, with the invent of cameras and camera phones, photographs have become a vital part of news telling because they add value to the story and are. Although, words can never be replaced, in my opinion, images are now more effective for news media.
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pictures
to convey the
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news
.
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people
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agree
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pictures
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get
the message across.

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benefits of photos are that It
further
substantiate the
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news
by providing the evidence. As
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people
nowadays are
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very
critical about everything,
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so
they need strong supportive visual representation in order to believe in
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some
story.
As a result
,
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pictures
with any
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news
article strengthen the credibility of it.
For instance
, any earthquake or natural disaster
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news
is accompanied
by the photos of mass destruction, which can
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make
rest of the population to feel how
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big
calamity it was.
Also
, it will
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help
them sympathize with their fellow brothers.

Furthermore
, in
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today
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world,
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people
do not have
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enough
time to go through the whole article.
Therefore
, a photograph or a graphical representation can
easily
convey the required message without the need of
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many
words.
For instance
, a line graph of economic growth over the years can be easier for a layman to comprehend.
Also
,
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some
images or photographs can be
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used
to gain the attention of
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people
towards the
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news
. Such as,
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some
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news
channels compete to
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get
the
first
exclusive
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picture
of any
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event
, like an award
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show
or movie premiere or any social
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event
,
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so
that they can have audience attention.

In conclusion
, with the
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invent
of cameras and camera phones, photographs have become a vital part of
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news
telling
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because
they
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add
value to the story and are. Although, words can never
be replaced
, in my opinion, images are
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now
more effective for
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news
media.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v. 13

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
279 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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