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News editor what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? v.2

News editor what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? v. 2
Every news article is essential for human beings to aware of whole things. News editors decide to choose what to telecast on television and what to print in the newspaper. In my opinion, it would be both positive and negative impact on people, if the news has been broadcast by the lexicographer. There are myriad advantages if this situation. Firstly, as the people watching the news on television, it may help to humanity for awareness of what is happening around them as well as there are several things on television which person can learn for a different purpose, like education. Secondly, if the news editors broadcast decent news of drugs, then more and more youngsters can easily abet from it and the lawbreakers could not commit crimes in their life, as the superior news has been printed by supervisor. For instance, due to heavy rain in India, many people do not know about it, if the news editors telecast every news about the environment, this may help to every person for beware about climate issues in their nation. Lastly, today, children do not prefer to play outdoor, such as football, basketball, and various games, even if writer broadcast such programs about the best players of any outdoor game, therefore it could become real for the development of the toddlers. Apart from this, there are also certain drawbacks associated with this problem. Sometimes the news editors print wrong news in the newspaper and on television due to they want to earn handsome income to broadcast every news, but it would be a negative impact on the evolution of children as well as many times they watch some program-related to drugs and crimes, as a result this may lead to teenager for committing the perilous crime and they take drugs in their life. For example, a recent study conducted in Europe that if bad news is being reported in newspapers and television, then the majority of people watch that news, thus many people do wrong things in the life, such as murder, rape, and even robbery. Consequently, the countries and people would be grappled several problems from it. To recapitulate, although writer telecast every news in the newspaper and television, it is a decent way to control the number of crimes around the globe. yet the people should be concerned about dangerous news broadcast in the newspapers and the social sites.
Every
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news
article is essential for human beings to aware of whole things.
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editors decide to choose what to telecast on
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television
and what to print in the
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newspaper
. In my opinion, it would be both
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positive
and
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negative
impact on
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people
, if the
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news
has been
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broadcast
by the lexicographer.

There are myriad advantages if this situation.
Firstly
, as the
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people
watching the
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news
on
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television
, it may
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help
to humanity for awareness of what is happening around them
as well
as there are several things on
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television
which person can learn for a
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different
purpose, like education.
Secondly
, if the
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news
editors
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broadcast
decent
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news
of drugs, then more and more youngsters can
easily
abet from it and the lawbreakers could not commit
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crimes
in their life, as the superior
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news
has
been printed
by supervisor.
For instance
, due to heavy rain in India,
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many
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people
do not know about it, if the
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news
editors telecast every
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news
about the environment, this may
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help
to every person for
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beware about
climate issues in their nation.
Lastly
,
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today
, children do not prefer to play outdoor, such as football, basketball, and various games, even if writer
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broadcast
such programs about the best players of any outdoor game,
therefore
it could become real for the development of the toddlers.

Apart from this, there are
also
certain drawbacks associated with this problem.
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Sometimes
the
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news
editors print
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wrong
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news
in the
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newspaper
and on
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television
due to they want to earn handsome income to
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broadcast
every
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news
,
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but
it would be a
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negative
impact on the evolution of children
as well
as
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many
times they
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watch
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some
program-related to drugs and
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crimes
,
as a result
this may lead to
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teenager
for committing the perilous
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crime and
they take drugs in their life.
For example
, a recent study conducted in Europe that if
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bad
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news
is
being reported
in
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newspapers
and
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television
, then the majority of
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people
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watch
that
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news
,
thus
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many
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people
do
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wrong
things in the life, such as murder, rape, and even robbery.
Consequently
, the countries and
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people
would
be grappled
several problems from it.

To recapitulate, although writer telecast every
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news
in the
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newspaper
and
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television
, it is a decent way to control the number of
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crimes
around the globe.
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yet
the
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people
should
be concerned
about
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dangerous
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news
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broadcast
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
and the social sites.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
43Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay News editor what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
399 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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