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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. v.1

News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. v. 1
It is the responsibility of the news editor to decide what gets printed in their newspaper or what matters get aired on their news channel. There can be several aspects that can influence their decision in this regard, such as their inclination to spread the truth amongst the people. Sometimes truth can be harsh and bad, one can never get accustomed to such news. However, increasing the number of good news can be highly uplifting for the masses and create positivity. Certain influences on the editor along with their thought process are the key to the decision of what goes out to the audience. For instance, if the owner of the news firm is from a political party, he/she might expect their editor to circulate news that supports the party more than the facts. Which can be really bad for the general public. There is a great deal of negative happenings around the world and one can never be comfortable with bad news. No matter what, they can be depressing and harsh realities. They always tend to have a negative impact on the community. For example, there have been a number of shootings all over the USA and no matter how many times we listen to them, we always feel bad for the victims. No one can get used to them. On the other hand, it is always a pleasure to know of good news. It creates a healthy and a positive atmosphere and builds up the confidence. More good news creates more positive discussions and leads to much happier society. In conclusion, although it is the editor’s choice to decide what is communicated through their mass media, focusing on spreading more good and positive news can help the society than bad ones.
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editor to decide what
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printed in their newspaper or what matters
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aired on their
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channel. There can be several aspects that can influence their decision in this regard, such as their inclination to spread the truth amongst the
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people
.
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truth can be harsh and
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bad
, one can never
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accustomed to such
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news
.
However
, increasing the number of
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good
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can be
highly
uplifting for the masses and create positivity.

Certain influences on the editor along with their
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thought
process are the key to the decision of what goes out to the audience.
For instance
, if the owner of the
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news
firm is from a political party, he/she might
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expect
their editor to circulate
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news
that supports the party more than the facts. Which can be
really
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bad
for the
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general public
.

There is a great deal of
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happenings around the world and one can never be comfortable with
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bad
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. No matter what, they can be depressing and harsh realities. They always tend to have a
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negative
impact on the community.
For example
, there have been a number of shootings all over the USA and no matter how
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times we listen to them, we always feel
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for the victims. No one can
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get
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to them.

On the other hand
, it is always a pleasure to know of
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good
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news
. It creates a healthy and a
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positive
atmosphere and builds up the confidence. More
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good
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news
creates more
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positive
discussions and leads to much happier society.

In conclusion
, although it is the editor’s choice to decide what
is communicated
through their mass media, focusing on spreading more
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good
and
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positive
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can
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help
the society than
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bad
ones.
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IELTS essay News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. v. 1

Essay
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5 paragraphs
293 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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