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Never, never give up, means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree? v.1

Never, never give up, means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. v. 1
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that human beings put their efforts to experience success throughout history despite trials and tribulations in everyday life. Indeed, achieving success is one of critical utmost importance life goals that people bend over backwards to reach. Stemming from this fact a relevant question that is a moot point is whether people should make an effort constantly in order to be successful. Due to controversial nature of this question there is not a general agreement on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that not until people try hard for their goals can they make a progress day in day out. In the ensuing paragraphs some convincing reasons will be delineated to elaborate my personal stance. To commence with, there is no doubt that human beings have multitude goals for their future life and hardly can they achieve them without being persistent. Generally phrased, life goals make people decide their path and being successful in their personal life. As a matter of fact, stop working and never keep trying might have deleterious effects on people' s lives. For instance, according to a study conducted in my country, a plethora of people who have neglected their future life goals, ran into a huge and serious problem and overwhelmed by stress owing to the fact that life goals could guarantee people' s success. To elucidate more on this issue, if human beings want to ensure their future life, they should make a plan and life goals and have a hard-working attitude to reach their goals. Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that keep trying through hard working attitude provide an opportunity for people to enhance their self-confidence. To put it in other word, when people do not have any plan in their lives, they will suffer from paucity of self-esteem due to the fact that life without goals seem to be paralyzed and people could not keep their incentive to go on. Going into the depth, make plans and goals not only can develop people' s confident but also provide fertile ground for people not to do something wrong. However, what was alluded to above can' t be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the countless merits it has, indisputably, keep trying and never stop working might not be useful and effective due to the fact that crowds of goals need deep and precise thought. In fact, without thinking wisely and a sound decision hard working would be sheer waste of time. Nonetheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale. In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that life goals are of utmost importance goals that could provide an opportunity for people to be successful and ensure their future life.
By and large, it
is established
beyond doubt that human beings put their efforts to experience success throughout history despite trials and tribulations in everyday
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life
.
Indeed
, achieving success is one of critical utmost importance
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life
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goals
that
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people
bend over backwards to reach. Stemming from this
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fact
a relevant question
that is
a moot point is whether
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people
should
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make
an effort
constantly
in order to be successful. Due to controversial nature of this question there is not a general agreement on this issue. I am,
however
, to a great extent of the conviction that not until
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people
try
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hard
for their
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goals
can they
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make
a progress day in day out. In the ensuing paragraphs
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some
convincing reasons will
be delineated
to elaborate my personal stance.

To commence with, there is no doubt that human beings have multitude
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goals
for their
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future
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life
and hardly can they achieve them without being persistent.
Generally
phrased,
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life
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goals
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make
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people
decide their path and being successful in their personal
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life
. As a matter of
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fact
,
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stop
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working
and never
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keep
trying might have deleterious effects on
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people&
#039; s
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lives
.
For instance
, according to a study conducted in my country, a plethora of
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people
who have neglected their
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future
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life
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goals
, ran into a huge and serious problem and overwhelmed by
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stress
owing to the
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fact
that
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life
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goals
could guarantee
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people&
#039; s success. To elucidate more on this issue, if human beings want to ensure their
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future
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life
, they should
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make
a plan and
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life
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goals
and have a
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hard
-working attitude to reach their goals.

Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that
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keep
trying through
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hard
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working
attitude provide an opportunity for
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people
to enhance their self-confidence. To put it in other word, when
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people
do not have any plan in their
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lives
, they will suffer from paucity of self-esteem due to the
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fact
that
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life
without
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goals
seem to
be paralyzed
and
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people
could not
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keep
their incentive to go on. Going into the depth,
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make
plans and
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goals
not
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only
can develop
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people&
#039; s confident
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but
also
provide fertile ground for
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not to do something
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.
However
, what
was alluded
to above
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can&
#039; t
be overgeneralized
to all contexts. Alongside with the countless merits it has,
indisputably
,
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keep
trying and never
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stop
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working
might not be useful and effective due to the
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fact
that crowds of
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goals
need deep and precise
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thought
. In
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fact
, without thinking
wisely
and a sound decision
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hard
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working
would be sheer waste of time. Nonetheless, it does not
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make
those preceding benefits pale.

In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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life
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goals
are of utmost importance
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goals
that could provide an opportunity for
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people
to be successful and ensure their
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future
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life
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
61Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
The man who does not know other languages, unless he is a man of genius, necessarily has deficiencies in his ideas.
Victor Hugo

IELTS essay Never, never give up, means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
463 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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