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Neighbours are essential in our life. What qualities do you seek from your neighbours? v.1

Neighbours are essential in our life. What qualities do you seek from your neighbours? v. 1
Neighbours are the people who live next door to every person in this world. Good neighbours cast an effect on everyone's life positively as they stand by each other in the hood and bad times. So, I think that manifold qualities are present that people who live near to them should possess, which will be discussed further in the upcoming paragraphs. The most significant trait that everyone seeks from their neighbours is respectful behaviour. To clarify it, neighbours ought to maintain the loyalty between each other which would definitely help in having a good reputation among system and even it leads to strong/robust ties/bondings. Along with this, the good neighbours are the highly regarded and important person, as they may be the first to rush for lending a helping hand during the crisis. In addition, neighbours should be a part of the process of socialization. This is because, people can interact with each other by dint of it, they can share their problems, ideas and thoughts which is a good sign of building strong connections among society. Hence, this can make the level of honesty too strong among them. Another attribute is that they should be willing to assist others. To simplify it, neighbours are as imperative as the relatives because they could provide immediate help in emergency situations which mortals encounter in their daily life. Thus, helping each others might form a harmonious bond among neighbours. To conclude, these are the precious and indispensable qualities of a good neighbour. Everyone is blessed with extraordinary amazing neighbours as I advocate.
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Neighbours
are the
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people
who
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live
next
door to every person in this world.
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Good
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neighbours
cast an effect on everyone's life
positively
as they stand by each
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other
in the hood and
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bad
times.
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So
, I
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think
that manifold qualities are present that
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people
who
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live
near to them should possess, which will
be discussed
further
in the upcoming paragraphs.

The most significant trait that everyone seeks from their
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neighbours
is respectful
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behaviour
. To clarify it,
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neighbours
ought to maintain the loyalty between each
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other
which would definitely
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help
in having a
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good
reputation among system and even it leads to strong/robust ties/
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bondings
. Along with this, the
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good
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neighbours
are the
highly
regarded and
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important
person, as they may be the
first
to rush for lending a helping hand during the crisis.

In addition
,
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neighbours
should be a part of the process of socialization. This is
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because
,
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people
can interact with each
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other
by dint of it, they can share their problems,
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ideas
and thoughts which is a
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good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sign
of building strong connections among society.
Hence
, this can
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make
the level of honesty too strong among them. Another attribute is that they should be willing to assist others. To simplify it,
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neighbours
are as imperative as the relatives
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because
they could provide immediate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in emergency situations which mortals encounter in their daily life.
Thus
, helping each others might form a harmonious bond among
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neighbours
.

To conclude
, these are the precious and indispensable qualities of a
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good
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neighbour
. Everyone
is blessed
with extraordinary amazing
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neighbours
as I advocate.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Neighbours are essential in our life. What qualities do you seek from your neighbours? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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