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Nearly every new building is designed by an architect nowadays. Some people believe that is important for a building. v.1

Nearly every new building is designed by an architect nowadays. Some people believe that is important for a building. v. 1
Over the years, buildings of various types have undergone major changes. With the advancement of the technology, the architectural world has reached a level where it has almost no boundaries. What seemed to be near impossible in the past is now a simple task for architectures with the use of advanced technologies. During earlier days only large buildings were designed by architects but in recent times it's a commonly seen trend that professionally trained architects being used for almost every building construction that undertaken. With a fast paced economy and development of human conditions, people are now very sound financially. And as they grow bigger so is their demands and expectations which grow wider. People nowadays construct buildings of the highest order, not only the one that suits their needs and requirements but also the one which is of the utmost beauty and luxury. And this asks for a different level of expertise and that's where the role of an architect comes in. In my opinion, buildings constructed these days are all done by highly qualified architects and this is the reason behind the hike in the number of architects. Educational institutions also start focusing on this profession and aim at making the best architectural students. On the whole, people and companies demand a lot from architects these days and the growing pressure to build the best is proving to be a challenging task to most architects. With technological advancements in the future, buildings will be designed by machines and the architectural world will break furthermore boundaries and challenges.
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buildings
of various types have undergone major
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changes
. With the advancement of the technology, the architectural world has reached a level where it has almost no boundaries. What seemed to be near impossible in the past is
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now
a simple task for architectures with the
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use
of advanced technologies. During earlier days
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only
large
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buildings
were designed
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architects
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but
in recent times it's a
commonly
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seen
trend that
professionally
trained
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architects
being
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used
for almost every
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building
construction that undertaken.

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fast
paced economy and development of human conditions,
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people
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now
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very
sound
financially
. And as they grow bigger
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so
is their demands and expectations which grow wider.
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People
nowadays construct
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buildings
of the highest order, not
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only
the one that suits their needs and requirements
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but
also
the one which is of the utmost beauty and luxury. And this
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asks for
a
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different
level of expertise and that's where the role of an
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architect
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comes
in.

In my opinion,
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buildings
constructed these days are all done by
highly
qualified
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architects
and this is the reason behind the hike in the number of
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architects
. Educational institutions
also
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start
focusing on this profession and aim at making the best architectural students.

On the whole
,
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people
and
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companies
demand a lot from
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architects
these days and the growing pressure to build the best is proving to be a challenging task to most
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architects
. With technological advancements in the future,
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buildings
will
be designed
by machines and the architectural world will break
furthermore
boundaries and challenges.
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IELTS essay Nearly every new building is designed by an architect nowadays. Some people believe that is important for a building. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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