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Movies are popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer v.3

Movies are popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer v. 3
Movies are a form of entertainment that shows a story in series of motion pictures. Movies are one of the most universal things that is relatable by everyone in the world. They are popular around the world, and almost anyone that has access to Televisions has seen some kind of movies. Some of the reasons movies are so popular in the world are the following. First and Foremost, movies are a form of entertainment. Everybody loves to engage in some sort of fun activities, and one of these activities people indulge in is watching movies. They are produced in such a way that people find some aspect of the movies they can associate with. After a long day at work for example, some workers prefer to wine-down by watching a movie. Secondly, movies are popular around the world because of the learning they afford us, movies are made in a way that they provide lessons to humans. Some movies are based on love and relationships, people that are involved in such relationships could watch those kind of movies to learn a thing or two. Also, students preparing to write an English based tests could watch English movies to build their listening skills. In addition, movies made in some countries portray the way of living in such countries. By watching these movies, we tend to learn about the country without having to travel and live in the county. And this provides us with some exposure which would have been expensive to do without movies. Finally, movies are diverse and can be made to be peculiar to a particular society. For example, illiterates in Nigeria that can’t comprehend English language can watch movies produced in their language. If there was only one language to make these movies, it would have been difficult for some parts of the world to watch and derive entertainment from it. This makes it possible for everyone around the world to relate to and enjoy it, and this has also made it popular. In conclusion, movies are popular all over the world because it’s a form of entertainment, a way of learning, and also it’s diversity.
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are a form of entertainment that
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a story in series of motion pictures.
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are one of the most universal things
that is
relatable by everyone in the
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world
. They are
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popular
around the
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world
, and almost anyone that has access to Televisions has
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seen
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some
kind of
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movies
.
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Some of the
reasons
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movies
are
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so
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popular
in the
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world
are the following.

First
and Foremost,
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movies
are a form of entertainment. Everybody
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loves
to engage in
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some
sort of fun activities, and one of these activities
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people
indulge in is watching
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movies
. They
are produced
in such a way that
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people
find
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some
aspect of the
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movies
they can associate with. After a long day at work
for example
,
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some
workers prefer to wine-down by watching a movie.

Secondly
,
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movies
are
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popular
around the
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world
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because
of the learning they afford us,
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movies
are made
in a way that they provide lessons to humans.
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Some
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movies
are based
on
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love
and relationships,
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people
that
are involved
in such relationships could
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watch
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those kind
of
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movies
to learn a thing or two.
Also
, students preparing to write an English based
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tests
could
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watch
English
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movies
to build their listening
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skills
.
In addition
,
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movies
made in
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some
countries portray the way of living in such countries. By watching these
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movies
, we tend to learn about the country without having to travel and
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live
in the county. And this provides us with
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some
exposure which would have been expensive to do without movies.

Finally
,
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movies
are diverse and can
be made
to be peculiar to a particular society.
For example
, illiterates in Nigeria that can’t comprehend English language can
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watch
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movies
produced in their language. If there was
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only
one language to
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make
these
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movies
, it would have been difficult for
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some
parts of the
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world
to
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watch
and derive entertainment from it. This
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makes
it possible for everyone around the
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world
to relate to and enjoy it, and this has
also
made it popular.

In conclusion
,
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movies
are
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popular
all over the
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world
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because
it’s a form of entertainment, a way of learning, and
also
it’s diversity.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Movies are popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer v. 3

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
358 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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