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Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? v.11

Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? v. 11
At present days some people try to avoid travelling by plane or train. They prefer cars in order to manage their travel freely. Motorways advantaged to help drivers to get to destinations quickly. However, it causes set some problems like destroying vegetation and help in emergency situations. This essay is going to present these problems and solutions for them. At first, let's discuss why motorways become more dangerous for journeys. Essential is there are not enough road signs with appropriate speed limits. We used to see roadway signs every corner in cities, but in motorways you cannot face them frequently. So, without alarm speed limit drivers will try to overtake others or add speed, it gives rise to accidents and heavy traffics. The solution for this problem can be more than one. For instance, setting up special way signs about speed limits, patrol and sensors for controlling them. Also, it is better to punish drivers who will try to break the rules. In addition to the information above the next drawback is that motorways are not specialized to emergency situation and first aid. For example, if drivers got into the accident, he would not get help minutely or if his car ran out of petrol, he would wait till other drivers decide to help him. In fact, these problems seem insignificant, but it's important setting up emergency equipment: petrol station. Special areas for primary care of charging or signals. At last, in order to build motorway builders destroy the environment. As we can observe in lane edge not many plants. We know that vegetation important to avoid air pollution, so companies responsible for roadway should pay attention to the surrounding area, the same way they should avoid special green zones with rare species of animals. To summarize, as it was mentioned above more motorways are very convenient on the other hand, they have the disadvantages such as destroyed vegetation. All possible solutions were presented in this essay and hopefully in the future the government will pay attention improving the idea of motorways.
At present days
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some
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people
try to avoid travelling by
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plane
or train. They prefer cars in order to manage their travel
freely
. Motorways advantaged to
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help
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drivers
to
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get
to destinations
quickly
.
However
, it causes set
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some
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problems
like destroying vegetation and
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help
in emergency situations. This essay is going to present these
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problems
and solutions for them.

At
first
,
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let
's discuss why motorways become more
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dangerous
for journeys. Essential is there are not
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enough
road signs with appropriate
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speed
limits. We
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used
to
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see
roadway signs every corner in cities,
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but
in motorways you cannot face them
frequently
.
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So
, without alarm
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speed
limit
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drivers
will try to overtake others or
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add
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speed
, it gives rise to accidents and heavy traffics. The solution for this
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problem
can be more than one.
For instance
, setting up special way signs about
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speed
limits, patrol and sensors for controlling them.
Also
, it is better to punish
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drivers
who will try to break the
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rules
.

In addition
to the information above the
next
drawback is that motorways are not specialized to emergency situation and
first
aid.
For example
, if
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drivers
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got
into the accident, he would not
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get
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help
minutely
or if his car ran out of petrol, he would wait till other
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drivers
decide to
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help
him. In fact, these
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problems
seem insignificant,
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but
it's
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important
setting up emergency equipment: petrol station. Special areas for primary care of charging or signals.

At last, in order to build motorway builders
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destroy
the environment.
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As
we can observe in lane edge not
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many
plants. We know that vegetation
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important
to avoid air pollution,
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so
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companies
responsible for roadway should pay attention to the surrounding area, the same way they should avoid special green zones with rare species of animals.

To summarize
, as it
was mentioned
above more motorways are
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very
convenient
on the other hand
, they have the disadvantages such as
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destroyed
vegetation. All possible solutions
were presented
in this essay and
hopefully
in the future the
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government
will pay attention improving the
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idea
of motorways.
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IELTS essay Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? v. 11

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
342 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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